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Lulamoon-Crystal


Writing an AU

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It was a normal day in Maretine Bay but adding Izzy can make things a blast! But what if you add some chaos alongside her?

Basically just some random nonsense made into a story


Maybe not funny

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This is a really well written story. Loved the various forms of slapstick that you used in it, especially in regards to that bathroom wave.

Still, I do have a question: what in the world is Trixie doing in Maretime Bay? How did she get there, especially since G5 takes place over a thousand years after FiM ended. Did she use some sort of time travel spell in a previous story?

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Yeah, she was accidentally transported to G5 in another story. But her appearing there is also a bit of a reference to my AU and a roleplay I did with a friend on another site where Trixie explored other worlds, including G5

Okay, what is this and why did I upvote it?


Pipp walked up to Izzy, “So, we heard you’ve been causing- huh?” Pipp noticed Izzy snuggle her leg in her sleep, “Please let go...”

“Aww, that’s cute!” Sunny exclaimed.

Yeah, Pizzy (Pipp x Izzy)!

Awesome story! It's all so in-character!

Everyone sat on chairs in Izzy’s workshop. She stood in front of two large, heavily decorated cupboards that were made from recycled materials, she had a huge smile. “Alright, so you know how Sunny explained and mentioned old Equestria? I was amused by Pinkie Pie, so I wanted to recreate her party cannon!”

Aww the party cannon and something tells me this one not end well

Suddenly her body felt more energetic, “I feel... More... Powerful...” Izzy gasped. She jumped up on the table, and it immediately felt like she was going fast, “I’m as fast as Sonic!” She screamed in excitement as she ran ahead and dashed through town. To her, it felt like she was going at super speed. As she ran, she would have sworn she was leaving behind a trail of magical stars.

Oh my God it's the end of the world as we know it

“Hi Trixie! Bye Trixie!” The voiced said as she dashed past, knocking Trixie’s ice cream to the floor, leaving her to mourn her lost treat. “I’ll get revenge, Izzy,“ She said bitterly as she shed some tears and shoot her hoof up threateningly. “A great and powerful revenge indeed.”

What Trixie there did she time travel again

Well this was certainly an interesting story and apparently Izzy wanted to try something new and a little bit of old and she got the inspiration from Sunny's stories about the old Equestria and Pinkie Pie's party Cannon she wants to try of her own and she showed it to her friends but unfortunately some of the candidates did not go as well especially that flew her away luckily she was okay but days was very interesting productive for her first off these kids mistake her as a sea Pony then she wanted to get a milkshake and a donut but accidentally got the wrong order and drink the coffee and she went totally insane luckily her friends found her but afterwards she still testing out the party Cannon it wasn't perfect but it looks like they found a winner well like I said this was a very interesting story keep up the good work

Lol, cute story, Izzy sure is random at times. :pinkiehappy:

She jumped up on the table, and it immediately felt like she was going fast, “I’m as fast as Sonic!” She screamed in excitement as she ran ahead and dashed through town.

Okay, this is where you broke me. Idk how a long would even know about Sonic or be a e to compare themselves to him, but congrats, you made quite the interesting story here. I love it.

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