We Always Be Wondercolts Forever. (Big Fluttershy, Rainbow, Sunset and Luna fan).
Pipp is turned into a phone and decides this is an acceptable state of affairs, and an opportunity to earn more clout.
Zipp has objections.
(Written for Bean's Writing Group prompt 51 "Unexpected Transformation")
Somehow got to featured third and then second on 5/11/22! (Well sixth and then fifth with view mature on, but I keep that off so shh.)
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Quite good. Only thing I can say, is that I felt like Pipp's interaction method wasn't entirely clear. Did she have microphone access or could she only read texts? Was she displaying texts on the phone she became or sending them directly to the other ponies' phones. It appears that she cannot control the phone interface and only has control over the backend stuff as Izzy was able to tap through apps and use activate the camera with no interference from Pipp.
Overall, fun story.
But is she anatomically correct?
An artistic representation of Pipp as a phone:
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I did enjoy reading this story.
This is the most absurd fic I've read in a while.
I love it.
One of the best weird ideas done seriously I've seen in a while, very good. That ending nailed it too.
If it was Zipp, I'm sure the title of the story would have been My Sister: The Drone Pone
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Asking the real questions here.
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she smol
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Thanks so much!!! I'm glad you enjoyed it!
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Thank you for the kind words!
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Thanks again for offering some suggestions!
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Amazing, lol.
Funny! But I do agree more with Zipp here.
And when excitement from her new all encompassing clout dies down, Pipp going to have a moment where she realizes she lost sense of taste, smell, touch, and can't interact with physically with anypony, she'll be begging for Sparky to turn her back.
Also I would love to see a sequel in some capacity involving Sunny as a Twilight plush.
Nice and funny stuff, put a smile on my face.
Keep up the good work!
Also, you don't need to use separate comments to reply to different people, putting all the replies in one comment makes the comment section cleaner, don't you think so? (at least I think it would save some space
)
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"Pipp is smol" meme can be seen everywhere
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That is how we take stories so seriously lol
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Thanks so much!
Wait that's a thing you can do? Mind blown, lol.
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I certainly enjoyed prereading
Wowie, that was fun! :D
This is hilarious!
Now that I think about it: Weren't pegasi the only ones using phones pre-unification?
Maybe there is more behind this...
Not sure if Twilight would be like
, like 
or rather like 
upon hearing her name being used like this.
As long as she doesn't call herself Skynet everything should be alright.
Let me guess: Sunny is perfectly fine with that?
Good story!
I enjoyed reading it.
Hahaha poor Zipp. Glad Pip's having fun.
I think I agree with Zipp more here.
Like, how in the hell is being a phone not a problem when you're happy about it?
I think the others were kinda underacting to the situation.
Overall, great story I enjoyed a lot lol
Yeah, I'm not surprised that Pipp enjoyed being turned into a phone. RIP Zipp's sanity though.