The Forgotten Element

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It hasn't been easy for Sprout. Alone, and forgotten, he wonders if any creature cares, and then He shows up at his door.

Prereaders: Bike, QueenChrysalisforever, and Applezombi

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Art byChocchipPon

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Bicyclette

Bicyclette #1 · Jul 29th, 2022 · 6 · 1 ·

loved how cute this was when i read it in QnS!

PacifistDoodl3r

PacifistDoodl3r #2 · Jul 29th, 2022 · 4 · 3 ·

Sprout pouted. Grrrrrrr!!! Why did he have to be so… wonderful. Amazing. Handsome. Hitch and his paid off mortgage. He was so awesome. I wish I could have listened to him more back then, but now I can choose. I decide what I want, no pony else. “Hitch, I… I…,” Sprout stuttered. Words were hard, and these three little words were so important. “I love you.” He finally uttered, his face deep cherry red, and forcing his eyes to look right at Hitch.

this is so adorable!!!

Neither of them cared about food in this moment. The only thing that mattered was each other. True harmony.

MY HEART! My- STUPID SMILE ON MY FACE

23 KM To Nerdiness

23 KM To Nerdiness #3 · Jul 29th, 2022 · 3 · 3 ·

Just came to say that cover is pwecious

Melody Song

Melody Song #4 · Jul 29th, 2022 · 4 · 2 ·

Awwwwww

VoxArachne

VoxArachne #5 · Jul 29th, 2022 · 5 · 3 ·

awwwwww, cute! i'm not really a big fan of sprout, but i can kinda see it with this dynamic, the "i can see something special in you, you just need to move forward and take it" kinda thing

Nailah

Nailah #6 · Jul 29th, 2022 · 9 · 5 ·

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Thank you! If I made you like Sprout even a little, my story succeeds

Greatazuredragon

Greatazuredragon #7 · Jul 29th, 2022 · 4 · 3 ·

Cute little story.

Angel Midnight

Angel Midnight #8 · Jul 29th, 2022 · 4 · 3 ·

My gosh, this is adorable...

Posh

Posh #9 · Jul 29th, 2022 · 2 · 3 ·

Posh

Posh #10 · Jul 29th, 2022 · 6 · 2 ·

Sprout stood up from his barstool, leaving a tip on the counter. With every step, he could feel his heart aching, like a piece of him was just missing.

“Phooey on that damn pacemaker, who needs it, anyway?

“I should just go home,” He said, leaving the establishment, and walking right into the bright daylight outside. The light was so bright, it blinded him immediately. He found himself shielding his eyes with his hoof, and falling over into a slump of dirt.

Well, that’s what you get for bar-hopping at 2:35 in the afternoon, Sprout.

Incidentally, I’ve never related harder to a character in a story’s opening paragraphs.

How delightfully homoerotic! Hurt/comfort isn’t really my bag, and I have no idea who these characters are, seeing as I haven’t watched anything G5, but good for them, and good for you.

Lord of edge