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Zipp decides to take Hitch up to her favorite spot in all of Maretime bay during the most clearest night of the year for a bit of late night stargazing. Despite the her happy demeanor, Hitch can see that something is bothering the mare quite a bit.

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Hitch and Zipp are in my top shipping pairs regarding G5. Good job.

Hehe, this is very good, I also find it curious how lately many stories of Zipp and Hitch as a couple are appearing. Also, it's Stallion no stlation XD.

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Can you blame us? The show is basically asking for it if they can’t do it themselves for whatever reason.

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Obligatory reminder of this

"Come one, Sheriff. Keep up. Don't want to leave you behind after all."

On

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how did that slip by

More Stormblazer is always welcome and this was a particularly sweet one. Zipp struggling with the expectations of being the heir to the pegasus throne is something I wish would be explored more, both on the show and by other writers. And of course Hitch is being the loving, supporting doofus of a coltfriend he is.

Great work! :twilightsmile:

"Don't forget about sleeping." Zipp remarked as she wrapped a wing around the orange stallion, pulling him close. "Can't very well sleep in the clouds now can I."

Yep that's right since they got the magic now Pegasus can walk on clouds now

Awww I really like the story here and a very cute one too having those two just start gazing and even zipp confessing to Hitch about her dilemma and how she felt about this whole situation but it was really awesome of him to support her and help her no matter what the situation will be and they would not do it alone and even share a kiss with each other I really like the dynamic talk with these two again really nice story keep up the good work

Nice, very nice! I find nighttime under starlight to be a very good setting for romantic stories. Great fic to add to the StormBlazer material.

Wow, Zipp and Hitch's late-night stargazing adventure sounds absolutely enchanting! It's fascinating how a serene setting under a clear night sky can reveal so much about one's emotions. I hope Zipp finds solace and comfort during this special outing. Sometimes, the beauty of the universe can help us unlock the secrets of our hearts. Wishing them both a magical and memorable experience together!

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Zipp didn't bother denying it. 😂

Pipp: What?? No!! Eeewww!! I am NOT into Hitch like that!!
Zipp: *Nervous wing movements*

This is such a lovely scene! The clear night sky and Zipp's favorite spot sound magical. I wonder what she's hiding behind that smile. Can't wait to see if Hitch can uncover her secret or if they just share a special moment under the stars!

Very cute, love from Philippines

Zipp bounced with barely contained excitement, her electric mane practically crackling with anticipation. Tonight was the night! The clearest night of the year, perfect for stargazing at her favorite spot in Maretime Bay. Hitch, ever the loyal sheriff, trailed behind with a gentle smile. He knew Zipp's facade better than anypony. Despite her giddy energy, her brow furrowed slightly every so often, and her gaze lingered a beat too long on the distant horizon. It was like she was looking for something, or maybe trying to escape something.

"This is gonna be incredible, Hitch!" Zipp declared, her voice a touch too loud. "Can you believe it? No clouds, no light pollution, just a sky full of sparkling stars!"

Hitch chuckled. "Sounds like a perfect night, Zipp. Though, truth be told, you could light up the night sky all by yourself." His voice held a warmth that sent a subtle blush creeping up Zipp's muzzle.

They trekked on, the silence punctuated only by the rhythmic clop of their hooves. Zipp's smile faltered for a moment. "Hey Hitch," she began, her voice hesitant, "remember that filly from New Zealand who came to visit last summer? The one whose family was struggling?"

"Sure do," Hitch replied. "Poor thing. Her family was having trouble getting their SASSA grant renewed. Sounded like a real mess."

SASSA grants, a distant memory for Zipp, flickered in her mind. Back in Zephyr Heights, things were different. Here, in Maretime Bay, everypony seemed to have their own worries, but something about that filly's story had struck a chord with Zipp.

They reached the crest of a grassy hill, and Zipp gasped. The entire sky was ablaze with stars, a breathtaking canvas of shimmering light. She spread out a blanket, her smile returning, genuine this time. Maybe tonight, under the vast expanse of the universe, she could finally confide in Hitch about what was truly bothering her.

That so cute Can't wait to see if Hitch can uncover her secret or if they just share a special moment under the stars!

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