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NicieLunar


I got brain damage...

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It was actually supposed to be a normal day as Celestia raised her sun and Luna lowered her moon, until a blinding flash of light engulf all of Equestria and Crystal Empire.

These two nations suddenly find themselves in a strange new world filled with war, chaos, and disharmony, how will they survive?

Let's find out!

This story is inspired by 'Summoning Japan'.


Author's note : I want to let you guys know that this story suffers stagnation and decline, each new page takes longer to upload, this is because both the Writer (Me) and the Editor (Flowbux) have a lot of real life matters such as School and college that keeps both of us busy and having difficulty in finding a free time to write the story. Except for my second editor! (Escalator).

BUT, this doesn't mean this story will be cancelled, I made a promise to finish this story and give it the ending it deserves! I just hope that one of you will volunteer to help us complete this project, you will be given the freedom to influence the storyline and even adding characters you might want to add to the story.


So if any of you are interested in helping you can always contact me.

Chapters (26)
Comments ( 771 )

What is Summoning Japan?

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Novels about Japan being transported to another world full of Barbarians.

Comment posted by softvase deleted Nov 20th, 2022

Damn, I missed the stories of this genre, I look forward to continuing this story. (If you see grammatical errors in my comment, then you know I'm using fucking google translator).

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I wouldn't say barbarians, more like arrogant bigots

Been a while since I read these stories. Hope this story isn't a black and white type.

The Empire will look upon your career with great interest, young one.

Oooo, never thought I’d see a fic about Equestria and the Crystal Empire being transported to our world! Two chapters in and I’m liking it already! I look forward to seeing more of this in the future! :pinkiesmile:

Curious to see where this goes. Decent start.

"यो इक्वेस्ट्रिया देश ग्रिफन साम्राज्यको लागि जाँदैछ, कसैले सुनेको छ?, हामीले अन्य देशहरूसँग सञ्चार गुमाएको छ, के तपाईं अझै त्यहाँ हुनुहुन्छ?" ("This is Nation of Equestria to the Griffon Empire, is anyone receiveing ?, we lost communication with the other countries, are you still there?")

Is this an actual language? cus it kinda looks indian or something like that, if so wouldn't they recognize it?

I’ve seen this idea or some variation attempted a few times. It always seems like they post two or three chapters and then give up. I hope you won’t be one of those because you have a great start here. Hope to see more soon!

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It's actually Nepali, I'm trying to give pony a beautiful looking and sounding language.
And no, they will not understand the language.
(Fun fact, Equestria's national anthem will be based on Nepal's national anthem)

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I promise to continue this

Woah, big as africa? Seems a bit far fetched. Mostly other authors depicts the size of equestria as half the size of the US, or atleast one of the US states.

I wonder if the goverment will experiment on ponies and bronies will protect them or if goverment will be just chill.
Anyway good fanfic, cant wait for more chapters

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Yeah, Africa is pretty chonky, like more then two times as big as Europe. Like 2.97 times as big. There even almost isn't enough space for a second Africa, maybe in the Pacific but that's it.

Don't forget that the Crystal Empire is also out there, Arctic or Antarctic location??

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Dude, Equestria is really big, from the North pole and to the south.
But I think you are right, maybe i should reduce the size a bit.

Comment posted by NicieLunar deleted Nov 20th, 2022

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No, the crystal empire still remained connected to the northern part of the continent of Equestria.
The difference is that they will experience a rise in temperature there which will make most of their territory habitable.

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MLPFIM doesn't exist on this version of earth.
So no bronies.

Iam excited about this fiction and looking forward to it. I love this kind of fictions, the fantasy world meeting the real world

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this genre already exists, search for "Conversion Bureau"

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Oh I'm sorry, but I wouldn't have humans forcibly turned into ponies in this story, this story was inspired by 'Summoning Japan' where they explore the political, economic, cultural, religious effects of Japan being transported to other worlds.

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This reminds of of the fanfic where the current germany forcibly got switched places with marienburg and got into the warhammer world.

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Well, thank god!!!! Because I really hated that misanthrope concept, and forcefully making the ponies antagonistic just because.

All of this soon changed due to Equestria's need to defend itself and its allies from the threats Earth would provide.

Oh brother. :applejackconfused: :facehoof:

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This reminds of of the fanfic where the current germany forcibly got switched places with marienburg and got into the warhammer world.

What is this fanfic and where can I read it?!

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What?
sorry, I'm not good in english.

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I'm quoting Charlie Brown from Peanuts.

Basically, I worried and dreaded on the eventual "threats" that both Earth/Humanity will show againist Equestria/Crystal War. And I'm not really pro with the typical "human vs pony" again. :facehoof:

"I have a bad feeling with this" luna said

Me after reading this
"This is where the fun begins."
This is a good story so far, though I will say there were a few grammatical mistakes and capitalization. But other then that it's good.

Ok I already like this story. I kinda don’t have anything to correct. For now the lore and flow of it spins quite good, but little problem is small chapters. I understand that maybe you are better writing short and often, than ling and… not that often. I’m just suggesting.

I would rate the story 7,5/10 for now

I would comment on every chapter with rating if it doesn’t bother you
THIS IS JUST MY PERSONAL OPINION! I don’t want to harass etc.

This looks interesting I hope to see more.

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Oh, sure.
I'll try to write longer chapters, maybe 2000 or 3000 word?

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I'm sorry, I used Google translate in making this, and this is the first story I've ever written.

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That's fair, I'd say look for an editor, in my experience it makes things a lot easier plus it's nice to run chapters by someone to make sure kinks are worked out before hand

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Can you tell me where can I get the Editor?

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There is a group here on the site that does editing, aside from that you could ask around, I'm sure someone out there is willing to help out. Other then that you could have people in the comments help catch things you may have missed when working on a chapter, that's what I do for the stories I do.

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why Nepal? Does this mean this earth doesnt have Nepal on it?

Now that I thought about it, the elements of harmony sending nightmare moon to the moon instead of turning her back into luna is kinda stupid.

Wait, if that's the case then the mane 6 never became the bearers of harmony?

improving America's relations with other countries and trying to make agreements with America's enemies.

Ummm I’m gonna come out say this but China isn’t something you want to be friends with, not unless you’re okay with them being your overlords.
Also it sounds like your making Adam to be a one of a kind politician even there were people like JFK and FDR in the USA.

nobody is asking if you own summoning Japan, this is a fanfiction website.

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Of course they are still the bearers of the elements of Harmony, they managed to save Luna from turning into Nightmare Moon for the second time.

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But it wasn't mentioned

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Hehe, forgive me if I don't know much about American politics, I just want Adam to be like the Alternative version of Trump, he still does stupid and funny things like Trump did in real life but the difference is he succeeds getting stuff done.

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Because making a language from scratch would make my brain cells burn, and to answer your question yes the earth still has Nepal, the language that ponies use is different from the Nepali that humans speak so they couldn't understand what ponies talking about.

I can't wait for the new chapter to come out.

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