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The Unseen


Gearhead, avgeek, brony, spaceflight nerd, and writer

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A strange storm transports Equestria and the Crystal Empire to Earth, less than four days before Germany would have invaded Poland and World War II would have begun. Unfortunately, during negotiations with world leaders, an evil entity breaks free of its prison and causes the war, and Equestria is drawn into it. How will they survive this?

Takes place just under two months after the two opening episodes of Season 3. Events diverge from there.

Inspired by 'Summoning Equestria' by NicieLunar and 'Ponyville, USA' by Rox

Chapters (47)
Comments ( 336 )

I'll admit this was a happening time for history, which is why I wrote a story set in this zone too. Good luck!

nice chapter mate keep it up cant wait for the next chapter:pinkiehappy::twilightsmile:

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Thank you very much :twilightblush: Next chapter should be out in a couple of days

Everyone: please leave feedback here so I can improve the story as time goes on, and also, put your guesses on who the main villian is.

cool chapter mate keep it up cant wait for the next chapter:pinkiehappy::twilightsmile:

Comment posted by The Unseen deleted Jun 26th, 2023

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Will Equestria gain a zone after Germany falls dividing it into five instead of four?

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The "main villain"? Seriously? We all really know who one of the main villains are, and it rhymes with liter.

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Maybe, but I haven't decided yet.

Will Twilight’s coronation still go on while Equestria is fighting against the Axis Powers?

great chapter mate keep it up cant wait for the next chapter:pinkiehappy::twilightsmile:

Danzig or war

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Most likely not, but we'll see as the storyline progresses

I love the story so far, I am looking to see how the rest of it plays out.

awesome chapter mate keep it up cant wait for the next chapter:pinkiehappy::twilightsmile:

Will they visit the USSR since they never mentioned it?

Has Equestria changed the outcome of the war or will the Axis still lose?

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Maybe in a future chapter, we will visit the land of the communists

What if the Nazis starts the World War 2?
What if the World War 2 starts?

Great story, I hope you have success with this story idea.

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Thank you very much :twilightsheepish:

This is a good story, but i think the story is too straightforward. Like a massive continent suddenly teleported to your world, especially during the start of a world war, it will be stupid to just telling everyone about that. Irl maybe they will tried to hide it from another country

Plus if they suddenly announce this out of nowhere, it can cause panic among the citizen

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Well the world is already in panic, so I made contact peaceful to calm people down

cool chapter mate keep it up cant wait for the next chapter:pinkiehappy::twilightsmile:

Discord was happy. Everything was going according to plan. In fact, for some reason, the statue had started cracking even faster now, probably due to all the chaos on Earth, he was already around 40% free, and he would be free just a few hours before Celestia's League of Nations visit. Now, he needed to think about the next part of his plan to put Earth into chaos for some time to come. Not just days, not weeks, not months, no, years to come. With all the political unrest now between Earthly nations, he decided he'd start a war.

Not just any war, one that would cripple this world for years to come. It wouldn't be some dispute between just one or two countries. It would be a large war, one involving the entire world. It would be a.... World War, for lack of words to call it.

So Discord is now being a very heartless bastard by just letting millions of innocent lives to die!!??

He does realized that a World War 1 already happened!?

Sure, World War 2 was almost about to happen, due to Nazi Germany already planning to invade Poland, along with conquering Europe.

But Discord helping Hitler out, and the other two Axis Powers ( Fascist Italy and Imperial Japan. ) isn't helping his case.


IF the ponies, along with the Allied Nations finally figured out that this Second World War is all of Discord's doing by helping with the Axis Powers.


I highly doubt Celestia will ever, ever want to "reform" him after what he had pulled.

This might be a bit nitpicky but while we don’t know how old she is, I’m fairly certain Cadance isn’t 600

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Peace was never an option

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So it's bye-bye Discord's "reformation" plan by Celestia?

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Wasn't planning on him being reformed anyway tho ☺

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Welp, guess their is no Fluttershy x Discord in here. :fluttershyouch:

When will the Germans and the others show up?

great chapter mate keep it up cant wait for the next chapter the foreign volunteers in the Waffen ss claim they fought the right enemy and history judges them as war criminals and traitors The irony is allies from 1947- 1991 had to fight the real enemy that once allied with them





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we'll see the Germans in chapter 10, maybe sooner

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A true irony indeed

I have a question, The supposed ambassadors of United States and Britain are painting themselves too much as the good guys that they now sound like hypocrites so why? So its just that now America and Britain are allies after the 13 Colonies and the American Revolution? Is he going to just glossed over the slavery and the American Civil War as well as the Taming of the West that involved stealing land from the Native Americans? Not to mention that Britain's Government is a Parliament and they have been involved in slavery and racism too especially in their African and Indian colonies..

Wow... Just wow... Maybe Mr. Rockmond and Mr. Wood here should be reminded since they sound so proud of their colonies.

Perhaps the easiest way to understand why colonialism was so horrific is to imagine it happening in your own country now. It is invaded, conquered, and occupied by a foreign power. Existing governing institutions are dismantled and replaced by absolute rule of the colonizers. A strict hierarchy separates the colonized and the colonizer; you are treated as an inconvenient subhuman who can be abused at will. The colonists commit crimes with impunity against your people. Efforts at resistance are met with brutal reprisal, sometimes massacre. The more vividly and accurately you manage to conjure what this scenario would actually look like, the more horrified you will be by the very idea of colonialism.

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That will be revealed next chapter...

Comment posted by DAVID770 deleted Aug 9th, 2023

This story is very good bro I even have ideas for the next chapters, you could do some chapters focused on the militarization and development of equestria and the crystal empire when the war starts from the modernization of the troops bringing them to the 20th century.

This story has the potential for a second season in the Cold War period.

(Oh sorry if my English is bad above and because I'm Brazilian I only know a little of the English language)

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Yes, there are going to be a few chapters like that, and also, there will eventually be one on the Cold War as well. Before that, I'll do some side stories as well.

cool chapter mate keep it up cant wait for the next chapter i wonder if ponies were given the lee enfield mk1 they can do the mad minute:pinkiehappy::twilightsmile:

"Yes, 'Tia, I know. It was I who sent Equestria and the Crystal Empire to Earth."

"Bu-bu-but, why?"

"I only let you stay on Equis for that long because your duties there finished some days back. From now on, Earth is your permanent home. The humans will need your help, my two daughters."

Are you sure about that? Considering that events of season 4 through 9 might never even happen. And probably never will. :ajsleepy:

"What kind of help, mother?" asked Luna.

"I cannot hold this dream much longer. You have to figure it out yourself. Goodbye, my daughters. We will meet again one day, and this time, you won't need to wait so long." said Faust, as the dream began to dissolve.

"Wait, mother!" shouted Celestia as the dream dissolved, leaving only Celestia and Luna alone in the dreamscape.

"Sister, what did mother mean when she said the humans will need help from us?"

"I don't know, Luna, but whatever it means, it means something is on the horizon, something bad, and fast." said Celestia, waking up in real life, no longer asleep, wanting to figure out what Faust's message to them meant.

Sheesh. She is not going to tell her daughter's that a literal world war ( The second ) is coming!?

"I am deeply saddened and appalled to learn about Britain's actions in their colonies. As the ruler of a diverse and harmonious nation, I can fathom how anyone could treat others with such cruelty and injustice. Racism and slavery are forms of hatred that go against everything I stand for. I do hope it eventually ends this practice. Wood, you are truly a good man, for trying to get your government to end this." said Celestia.

Very nice "settlement", Celestia. But, about the racism part.

Why wasn't Zecora treated nicely then!? :duck:

Or the ponies think too negatively of the Dragons, especially Fluttershy?

And the changelings is a moral dilemma too. Sure they attack and invade first. But what if in the past, they were treated unfairly by the ponies themselves, due to their bug appearance!?

It literally happened in many other stories in here.

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I was writing this while on vacation, so I got lazy and forgot to mention that

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She doesn't know what it is, since all she knows is an evil presence is around, and the humans need help.

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When you have the time, you could hopefully edit and rectify that.

Because even though Humanity has it's faults, what Celestia said technically sounds a bit hypocritical.

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