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Rainbow Dash takes Fluttershy out for a little practice in flight techniques, but when the Ponyville weather patrol doesn't follow Rainbow's set orders for the days weather, the two pegasai are stranded too far from home to make their way back to safety.

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I'd would like to say that the original idea belongs to StarShooterFrecklz down on deviantart, where I'm mostly active. The picture also belongs to her. When I read the description of the story, I recommended she or someone else should write it, make it a one-shot or something. She told me I could write if I wanted to, and so I did. She made a rough draft of the story, but mine differs from hers. Here is the rough draft.

If you liked the story, I hope you'll go to her page and give her some praise too. Not only is she a great artist, but she has some pretty nice idea for stories too. That is all! :twilightsmile:

That's it?
We needMOAR:flutterrage:
Especialy a chapter or two of RD chewing out and shouting at theponies who messed up the planned weather.:rainbowlaugh:

simple, something i need after all these stories.

D'aaaaaaaaaaaawwwwwwww.

Fav'd.

1312850 That would be pretty fun to write actually...I'll think about it:ajsmug:

I was really enjoying this, but the conclusion was so abrupt. That can't really be the end of the story, right?

I noticed that there are a lot of incorrectly used commas and ellipses, it became a little distracting after a while.

Sorta reminds me of that other fic where Rainbow and Flutters are stranded far away from home and fall in love on the adventure back.



Awesum :rainbowkiss:

WAT? No kiss?
Beh, I need moar to quench my curiosity... What happens next?

This cannot end. If you don't add another chapter I don't think this will even count as a romance.

Oh, and learn the difference between shes and she's.

Other than that, good story.

1316297 Your right, so I removed the romance tag. I might write a sequel, but right now I am feeling under the weather but, thank you. :twilightsmile:

1314869 I would have to agree with the ending being abrupt. I might write a sequel to this soon, when I'm not so sick...I removed the complete tag, so I'd keep a eye out for a update. Getting suggestions on here and also on deviantart to continue it, and I think it's a good idea to do so. :twilightsmile: Also went and removed un-needed commas. THANK YOU, for pointing it out. It helps me see where I've done wrong!

i must say i love love loved this story, i did sense quite a few daww romantic moments, and love how you had this set up! i am so excited that you decided to do more for it!!! very happy :twilightsmile::heart::pinkiehappy: cant wait!!

Great story! We need moar! :pinkiesmile:

Here is the second chapter...starring some good old Cloud Kicker!

I didn't take me as long as I thought it would, but I think it turned out pretty good. Next chapter should be up in the next few days and again...The original idea belongs to StarShooterFrecklz down on deviantart. Hope you guys enjoy and if you see anything that needs to be fixed, don't be scared to let me know! :twilightsmile:

Please don't make things to complicated...
Of course, blame it all on Derpy dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/Derpy_Hooves_lolface.png

1326067 Don't worry I wont. Right now Rainbow just has somethings to do...:derpytongue2:

Hehehhhhe:derpyderp2:oh derpy

Good gravy this took me a whole week to write, and edit. Sorry for it taking so long. :ajsleepy: The original draft for this chapter was in Fluttershy's perspective, but when I wrote it...I felt like it wasn't flowing with the story as well. So, it went back to Rainbow and now; the story is coming into place. Also, sorry if it seems a little unproductive, I promise we'll be getting somewhere next chapter!

A little sneak peekaroo= Fluttershy is coming back, and you know what that means! :raritywink:

Hope you enjoy! Feel free to tell me what you like/dislike...I don't mind. Spot any errors? Don't be scared to inform me, I'll go right ahead and fix them A.S.A.P!

I began to consider doing a quick stretch before taking off. After sitting on a cushion for almost an hour made my leg a little soar, but I wasn't complaining. Me and Twilight were going to share our experiences in romance, which is something I never guessed I'd share with Twilight. Shes just so…eggheady. Not like I don't think she could get a mare or even a stallion, its just her eggheadish ways, and my athletic awesome ways, don't match.

sore*
Twilight and I*

Thanks for another great chapter!

i.imgur.com/j4Nnv.png ~Wolf

1366321 Thank you for pointing those out, and your welcome.:twilightsmile:

1366187 love the story so far and i mean that YOU CLIFF HANG LIKE A BOSS:flutterrage:


1366321 WHERE DO YOU GET THESE EMOTICONS?

I like the story so far, but there are far too many errors. You should consider getting a proofreader.

To be honest, this chapters been in my Word Processor for two weeks. It was already half done, so I just finished it up last night with a few revisions here and there. Was uploaded at like 11:30 last night on dA, but didn't bother uploading here cause I have to go back into the story and replace stuff like [*i] from <*i>. There wasn't too many in this chapter, like two. Not a huge fan of this site when it comes to publishing.

Anyway, I hope you enjoy; and if there's any wrong with it, just leave a comment and I'll get to it A.S.A.P. Just take this chapter and leave me alooneee! :ajbemused:

PS: Sorry it's short. It just is. SORREH.

1400444 I know, but the next chapter is longer. :rainbowwild:

Can not wait for next chapter! I hope it goes well between them!

The beginning of the climax for the series, I hope you enjoyed. I split it up in two parts, cause right now I'm a little unable to finish it completely, so I am giving half of it. Well, not really half, where I left off; just sounds like a better ending for the chapter.

AN IMPORTANT NOTE: If you noticed the status, it says on hiatus. It is true; I'm putting it aside for a while. If you want further information on why, go look at my blog post. It provides a better explanation. Sorry about it being short again, though. :ajsleepy:

I hope this will do for while I'm on hiatus, help you pass over the time for the finale, then after the epilogue. Enjoy, and have a good day. :moustache:

I'm really getting in to this...first btw.:yay:

I see the words On Hiatus...

1432456a twilight and cloud kicker chapter?

1439337 Yeeup, that will covered. Hint hint, the epilogue :derpytongue2:

"Mind if I ask what your doing in the middle of a field, Fluttershy?"

Your should be you're

1441303 Thank you pointing that out, and fixed. :twilightsmile:

so ya, ive been busy and was stuck on ch. 3 for a while, just got done with chapter 5 (finally i am able to have time for leisure reading again!:twilightblush:) anyway, loving how its going, super cute ending on ch. 5! also, YAY for a twilight cloud kicker chapter!! :yay:

A very good story!! Too bad I had to stop after chap 3, stupid homework ponies are more important!! I'll like and fav! :twilightsmile::twilightsmile:

What! Only 1561 words! Well bugger. I expect the next chapter to make up for this.

On another note, that was a very nice chapter. Good to see you're not dead.

Yeeup, Rainbows Can Be Lonely Too is back in the works! The finale is near completion and after that is done, writing the epilogue that has some Cloud Kicker and Twilight :pinkiehappy: Uploading at different times, so yeah! :moustache: So many feels, died crying. But I will complete it. A.S.A.P. :pinkiesad2:

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Alright. I'm sorry this took a while to be uploaded. :ajsleepy: But I like to submit on deviantart first, and then here; but deviantart went ahead and put a new submit page and well, it's really confusing now :rainbowhuh: So...this is the finale, and soon the epilogue will be coming to wrap up the rest of the story..*cough* Cloud Kicker and Twilight *cough*

I hope you enjoy. It took me a while to do, and I hope it was worth the long wait! :twilightsmile:

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