You're My Reality

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Twilight's letter that Pinkie Pie reads, after an unfortunate event.

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PurpleFire18

PurpleFire18 #1 · Apr 21st, 2013 · 2 · ·

This was so beautiful

thundercloud4469

thundercloud4469 #2 · Apr 21st, 2013 · 1 · ·

i thought it was pretty good
it was short but still,good work
look forward to what you have in the future

Gavinormous

Gavinormous #3 · Apr 21st, 2013 · · ·

So what happened to Twilight?

Blees

Blees #4 · Apr 22nd, 2013 · 4 · ·

lyke dis if u cri evry tiem

Man, MLP fics are giving me the feels something fierce tonight. Also, there's nothing wrong with short. Portal is a fantastic video game, more so because of it's length. Like that game, your story doesn't overstay it's welcome, saying exactly what you need to say and ending when it's done. If your story's done, don't ever think you should keep typing just because you think it should be longer.

Cheer

Cheer #5 · Apr 22nd, 2013 · · ·

No feels. Sorry.

All I thought at the end was,
fim.413chan.net/fic/src/131504680135-One_Wat.jpg

HJSDGCE

HJSDGCE #6 · Apr 22nd, 2013 · · ·

How did Twilight die?

I need to know!

butboifranko

butboifranko #7 · Apr 22nd, 2013 · · ·

2464263 I didn't think it wasn't done; I just extended a little aftermath for Pinkie Pie to reach the minimum word count for the site. It was originally below and the first chapter of a story needs to be a thousand words. I may have threw one thing in that might expand the story, but nothing new really.