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After a tragic event, Twilight tries to numb herself to the pain and nearly loses the most important thing in her life.
Just a short sweet fic i wrote trying to break out of my writer's block.
Many thanks to my editor for again working her black magic in making my rambling thoughts readable. Check out her page
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how cute
here have a pony
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"Ya gonna hide behind fancy quotes, or are ya gonna get her back?ā
Advice I could have used, once upon a time.
Wonderful . . .
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I'm glad you enjoyed it X253
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HABUB, FUBUBUBDUH BUB HNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNG
*thump
She kinda looks like a duck.
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Same here, i've since learned to take a chance, usually, the worst thing that can happen is that you can go to jail.
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I'm glad you liked it. It was really just a cute little idea i got that i simply HAD to write down.
Thank you all for your time and comments.
Starlitomega
1087965 i did love it, but more like x1,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000
1087979
(mostly because i lost my spot twice and had to start over.)
Thank you for not copying/pasting THAT. It took me around ten mins to count your last post.
I may do more of these little fics to keep my mind fresh on Two Weeks (which is still a thing!) so keep an eye out in the future.
1088534 i Favorited that a whiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiile ago. still waiting
1088663
I Pinkie-promise, it is on it's way very soon!
Aside from your usual typos, reading your stuff is like eating candy. You're the kind of writer I want to be.
Never despair.
1089748
, that's totally on purpose. Also, many times I might use a word like "wanna" or "gimme" because it sounds more like natural speech. Those are the only things popping up on my spell checkers. Well, that, and I'm still not as good at quotation punctuation as I'd like to be.
i hope you're not referring to Applejack's speech
1091057 No, the dialogue is all fine. It's mostly just the formatting and grammar errors that trip me up when I'm reading.
*finds this in Twipie search*
*melts*
Um...could somepony scoop me up into a bucket...please? That is if you don't mind...
At first I didn't see what the problem was, then came that one line.
I... just....
*collects myself*
Okay. Oooookay, just gimme a few minutes here.
I lost my Dad in July, and my Grandmother last month (yeah, just ask me how my 2013's gone, I dare ya.) I didn't have an in-person relationship going on or anything like that, and I'm the only one in my family with a job at the moment, so I didn't really have a chance to break down like this, but I can so see Twi's side of it. Pinkie's too, mind you (though seriously, Pinkster, y'could've left a note saying you weren't leaving leaving!)
But damn man. Heart punch, right there.
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I've had a little bit of loss in my own life. I generally write when an emotion becomes too much.
I myself lost someone important to me. I wrote "Seed of Hope" when the memory became too much to handle one night. I usually have some elements of something ive faced in my life in my stories and it generally comes across to the readers. Either way, I hope this was an enjoyable read for you.
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Yes, albeit in a way that makes me want to hug you and cry.
One of these days I'll finish scooping out that damned heart thing, then I won't need to worry about it anymore....
I'm gonna cry....
this is an awesome story 
I'm a fan of 
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Good Job 
PF
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, you should read One Step A Time. It's Pinkieshy.
Thanks! If you like
I'm glad you enjoyed the story.
Another Twinkie fic from my past man dude, you wrote my first Twinkie fics. Wows
Cute one shot story. Also, RIP Twilight Velvet.
Aw. This is adorable. Wish it was longer. Great job though. I'm going to look for more Pinkie Pie stories!
Twilight Velvet
The fact that all the ponies at the train station ignored this entire scene playing out is... strangely realistic.
No kisses?