Rainbow tells the story about how and her and Twilight got together.
Something I did to help me get out of my writers block, and also to try something different. Enjoy!
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Twidash... blegh
sry man, but if i conflicts with Flutterdash, it's a no-go in my books =\
I find it intresting, they are quite the opposites and that always makes intresting couples.
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Short, sweet, and utterly great to read.
Few small grammar/punctuation issues, though.
1078183 twidash is my fav. yours i my second fav.
This was really sweet.
It's rife with errors though, and the ending is rushed. Cute story, but the presentation could be better. Maybe hire a proofreader?
Well, this was nicely short and sweet. I especially like how you managed to get inside RD's head for it and put the story into her own words.
I loved it on deviant art, and I shall love it here.
(It's Storylover.)
trolling? Is that what Twi's doing?
1082771 Thank you, and hello
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Not like that horribly limits the stories you can read or anything, right? Not like you're missing out on some of the best stories to ever come out of the MLP fandom. Twilight's List, A Bluebird's Song and Flying High, Falling Hard are just a few of the more popular Twidash stories alone. Then if you consider all the other pairings you're neglecting... Yeah. I totally get having your OTP (mine is Twidash, personally), but deciding to not read stories that might conflict with said OTP is rather foolish. You miss out on so much because you don't bother to branch out. Go read some PinkieDash or a MacDash story and see if you don't like it--something like A Camping We Will Go or The Games We Play, for instance.
1091786 I've read those, the only other pairing that conflict with them that i like are... OC x Fluttershy/Dash and a few others, and i have read some, i never really liked them >.> don't assume I've NEVER read the others (otherwise how would i know that i think Flutterdash is the best, hmmm, i always have a few points of comparison
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This is so true.
Fuck, my OTP is PinkieDash. I wrote Twilight's List, which is apparently the most popular and highest rated TwiDash story on the site. So yeah. OTPs are nice and I snort anything pink and blue, but don't limit yourself just because it conflicts with an OTP.
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"I snort anything pink and blue"
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You don't have snortable printer paper you use for printing fanfics?
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But what if you accidentally snort a bad story? Do you get a nasal strain of herpes or something?
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Generally I do read them first~
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Well that just takes all the surprise out of it! I thought you'd print it out and snort it while reading the story, so you get that added bit of suspense.
1167712 I Do
Well you haven't been online for.... 24 weeks, but apparently I have a reputation for commenting on every story that gets added to the Twidash groups I'm in so.. may as well keep that up.
Really good, actually. It all sounded like Rainbow actually was telling the story, her personality shows through, even with what she does and doesn't remember/think is important, and it's very real. The only problem I have is the punctuation mistakes. Mostly commas where they aren't needed, but it was enough to through the fow and pacing off and really break my immersion.
All in all, a nice little Twidash.
Well done i want to read more and know how much further the relationship goes.
Nonetheless this was rather sweet and as Dash would say it Awesome.
~Tobben
hmmm... is a really interesting story ...
The last sentence...
Poor Rainbow.
Take that, Shakes Spear! I don't know why so many people default to Palomino & Chestnut as the archetypal romantic tragedy. It not a story about true love, its a story about how fucktarded teenagers are.
I want to read the experiment on trolling! Have a like, fav, and derp.
All right. I need to look something up...now.
So...unless Twilight is referring to the definition of trolling which means to carefully and systematically search an area for something, than goddammit Twilight! You leave poor Rainbow Dash alone! First the Mare Do Well thing and now pretending to return her affections!? What did she ever do to you!?
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I mean....yes, but no. It's also a story about how communication is key in a good relationship.
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Oh come on! It's hilarious, and you KNOW it! It couldn't happen to a nicer mare!