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To paraphrase a GREAT movie bit: Strange trees dropping apples on people is no basis for a system of government.
The golden apple tree reminds me of that one tree from lotr crossed with that one myth where some gods had a farm set up for immortality apples. Maybe also that c s lewis story from before the lion the witch and the wardrobe, where the witch eats a weird apple and black fluid gets everywhere, if I remember the book right.
First you lie Gandalf the Gray out of this second I'm going to watch the Lord of the Rings trilogy now extended edition
damn, great note to hang on!
keep up the chapters!!!
Maybe be twilight Co ruler after in the show Luna retired with Celestia so another diachry wouldn't be a bad thing plus someone who been around enough to see the bad things that can happen might be able to point folks in a better direction especially since nobody was really going to question twilight after she became a princess though I do hope they everyone more time to prepare for the coronation. Considering that half the problems that happened were because they were rushing.
Moreeeee... now Twilight has a choice.
This means that the golden apples aren't as good as other apples, and I'm guessing based on what was said after that you meant the opposite.
Also, you just found one of the few things I would agree with muddling with; Twilight's ascension. I always felt that it was messed up that Twilight didn't get a choice in the matter. Whether or not Celestia was the one to turn her into an alicorn (personally, I don't think Celestia can turn anyone into an alicorn) she knew where the path she set Twilight on would end and she didn't even consider asking Twilight if she was okay with it.
Well I just hope he doesn't read Fall of Equestria because if he does he's going to have nightmares 😭😠😡🤬🤢🤮
Nice
But only one apple fell each time, right? What does two apples mean then?
i love this chapter
Ah, a person of culture. I am a fan of that one as well. Though I need to read the other one you said, looks interesting
so when is he going to watch the g5 movie?
I'm going to play my "called it" card.
Now the author can use this:
I'm So Meta, Even This Acronym...
I like how Gemini is being acting here. That is, she's being a bitch. And she has good reason to. But I hope she understands that Jethro only has good intentions for her and Mica.
Celestia has been put under extreme pressure. I'm surprised she hasn't collapsed like Twilight did.
And Jethro, can't get a day to spend with his new girlfriend/marefriend. Or maybe he did in the time skip.
I'm enjoying the story, it's getting really good.
Thank you for this chapter. This is obviously my own opinion, but I'm not exaggerating when I say that I have never read a story where the author has treated Twilight Sparkle as kindly as you did here.
An author could give Twilight unlimited access to all the knowledge in the world, give her a chance to go back in time to create a perfect timeline for herself and her friends, or write her spending a carefree immortality in love with Celestia, or Discord, or a human turned alicorn... but that couldn't compare to giving Twilight Sparkle the unparalleled gift that is informed consent about her own ascension.
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Definitely without a shot of doubt
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I was just about to mention that.
You know if I had to say the most weirdest parts of the fan fiction is the Displaced if you don't know what that is is people who dress up as their favorite characters went to a con found the shopkeeper and then send them to an MLP universe and they became those characters I think my personal favorite story so far are the Guardian by the light and Hello Stranger of course my personal favorite story is Man-of-War
OTOH, it could be the apples simply indicate those who have the greatest potential of influencing important events, or worse: being a powerful focus of change whether that change is for good or ill, rather than "being effective rulers". After all, it dropped one on Sunset Shimmer, and we all know how "effective" she was as a ruler.
With it dropping 2 on Jethro, it most likely means "double the chaos, double the fun!" as Luna might put it in words.
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Yeah but in the show after getting the rainbow pounded into her she did become the leader of the group. It was a rough start considering that everyone but the girls were giving her the cold shoulder and they weren't helping with the reminders of what happened and then acting like oops we definitely shouldn't have said that. I got the feeling from the comic issue that their bond wasn't as strong as should have been. Yelling at Sci twi was definitely the right thing considering that she knew that the experiment was going off the rails and yet she didn't stop. Scientists have rules when it comes to experimenting so everyone can be safe. If something unexpected happens they don't ignore it and keep going because that leads to more trouble. I sorry that she didn't have the courage to tell anyone that she needed help and that despite the clear evidence that she wasn't ready to mess with magic considering she almost got someone eaten by a giant plant she didn't listen to those who told her no.
Welp, if we're talking about whether Twilight becomes a princess/alicorn or not, then I must admit the season 9 ending very much bugged me. We'd been promised that Twilight wouldn't outlive her friends, but that certainly looked like that's what was happening. So even if they don't get her wings, they should get her immortality. The elements function as a whole. Without Honesty, Loyalty, Kindness, Generosity, and Laughter, Magic doesn't even exist. So without the other five elements, neither does Twilight's right to rule. In that regard, with Twilight's castle having a round table, that felt more appropriate than Season 9's ending.
But again, you're already at chapter 87 by now so all of my commentary is likely completely irrelevant by this point.
Story=shit
Anthro change 1/2 through story=shit
Unrealistic human thoughts =shit
Bad script =shit
Do better
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While everyone is entitled to their own opinion, I feel that your post was unnecessarily rude. There are plenty of stories here that I don't care for. But rather than denigrating an author's work I believe in giving some form of feedback to try and let them know what I don't like and why that is the case. That way we (the readers) can try and help the author grow into a better writer. Also not every genre of story is liked by everyone. There have been plenty of stories that I've not continued to read. But I didn't feel it necessary to belittle their work. I just accepted that I didn't enjoy the story enough to continue, while recognizing that others did like it.
I guess what I'm trying to say is that we should ask ourselves is would we appreciate such negative comments directed at our own work. Without the feedback to help us grow and improve.
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You offer only degrading remarks with no sort of constructive criticism whatsoever. It has the same value as someone saying a song sucks without stating why. And at the end you state to "do better".
Are your reasons personal? Is there a problem with grammar? Pacing? Spelling? Give a reason for your ratings.
To leave a comment like yours is worthless and a general stain most others would be happy to be without.
For someone with such a high opinion of themselves to be able to demand better quality while giving no reasons, by all means please write a better story. I'm very curious to see what you could come up with.
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*Slow clap*
Pure. Bloody. Poetry.
Thank you. I have had a reader like this in my own story. Only I spent the first few weeks in silent lament. I eventually realised the amount of people who love the story is far more than the amount that don't and this guy was just consistantly complaining. So i started ignoring his comments and eventually he just ragequit.
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Cool story, bro.
this feels way too meta, please never mention it again
what i'm getting from the few deeds and descriptions of Eris is, while Discord is mischevious and callous to the edge of sadism, Eris is irrefutably pure evil and cruel for the sake of cruelty
(Help by google translate)
I don't know what people think about Jethro's fear of Celestia, but personally it's almost the most reasonable thing in the story. Especially after I read this.
Borne of Caution by Fuggmann
Act 2: Chapter 25
Lee nods, locking eyes with Ninetales for a moment and wondering how to explain. "I told you I didn't have a home to return to after I told you two I was seeing a therapist, and that wasn't a lie. Without pokemon battling as a proxy for conflicts, wars in my world could get bloody, bloodier than anything any region here has ever experienced." He takes in Brendan and Zinnia's faces. "A lot of nations had stockpiles of missiles, missiles designed to fly all the way across the world and burn entire cities to the ground. The missiles used nuclear material as their explosive, meaning a huge blast and toxic radioactivity afterward. If the explosion itself didn't kill you, then the radiation poisoning would, along with everything around the epicenter for years to come," Lee says, trying to gently pry Sylveon's ribbon off his hand.
At his feet, the fairy is shaking, and steadfastly refusing to let go. The harder he yanks, the harder she grips. He eventually reaches for her pokeball, only to find that another one of her ribbons has wrapped around the capsule and mummified it, making it useless.
Sighing, Lee resumes. "The technology for detecting these missiles is far faster and more capable than any kind of counter-missile, and from that came a concept called mutually assured destruction, shortened to M.A.D. If one nation detected an incoming missile, they would loose their entire stockpile on the world and turn it into a zero-sum game. For a long time, that fear stayed everyone's hand."
Celestia,she is a good pony. It might even be the best you can find, so many times characters forget or don't even realize what she is.
When I see someone looking down on her Or do something stupid because of her politeness and kindness.
In my head I believed that nothing would happen because Celestia was a good princess. But my heart remembers the fire of Prometheus. remembers the fear we still share