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What is it with cliffhangers
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The next chapter will be the conclusion of the Lycan Empire Arc.
I also think telling Amethyst anything about humanity was a bad idea since ive seen the type of Empire the lycans are in strategy games. they will look for an excuse for war no matter what. The reason im against Jethro talking about humanity is because we have nuclear weapons and an empire like the lycans having nukes is scary
i both love cliffhangers and hate them but the way u did it was perfect so i love this one
He's gonna take her back with him.
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You think so?
Another cliffhanger 😖
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First comment on this story & I've been reading it for a hot minute now. Very interesting thing you got here.
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Why else would there be a third option between killing or coming to an agreement? The only thing I can think of is the loser becoming an indentured servant.... Or consort of some kind.
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Or he could do like the gladiator games and spare her, now i know gladiator games weren't fight to the death style like Lycan games are but it was still the only comparison i could come up with.
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But only sparing her seems like he would be spitting in the face of the Lycan traditions. That's the one thing he didn't want in the first place, so there must be a less lethal, but still completely life-altering way to make things right. Thus my thoughts that she would return with him.
*reading like the wind through great material* "yes"
*rising tention causing chanting* "yes yes yes"
*Tention resolves in a way of causing more tention* "Yes Yes Yes"
*Cliffhanger of DOOM* "...ffffffffffffffffffFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFUCK-in' gorsh dang it bro, it was just getting good."
in other words: Great chapter, i approve the scenes as they are written, even the one you were worried about, i have some advice if you don't mind it, but other than that i found nothing wrong with the chapter
How DARE you end it with a cliffhanger. You make me suffer by the waiting I have to go through!
Noooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooiooooooooooo gasp gasp gasp noooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooòoo curse you cliffhanger
There is dead, and there is dead to the Lycans?
Banishment, Exile, Servitude?
MMMOOOOORRREEE!!!!!!!!!!! lol was good, just guessin, but me thinks Amber is going to be serving him now. Atleast i think
was great.a dumb way he might have been able to win the fight is immidiatly fly up and stick to the roof then just wait. also looks like he is about to get a new freind/guard
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What? The Lycans still use swords and metal armor. Do you realize how many intermediate technologies, techniques, and little pieces of information they would need to wrap their heads around before they could even dip their toes into nuclear anything? Yeah sure, tell them about the destructive potential of uranium, make them a Geiger counter even (assuming he even knows how), and then? Watch them all drop like flies after they find and mine some uranium, bring it back to their hovel, and play with it like children discovering molding clay for the first time. They'd probably try to make assassination blades out of it. You know, an innately poisonous metal?
But seriously, nukes? Are you kidding? Jethro worked with money where he was from, remember? How is he gonna help them build a bomb?! He knows what human weapons can do. That's about seven steps removed from understanding how they work, and even knowledge of how they work wouldn't leave him knowing how to make all the little working parts, or how to put them together. Besides, how are they going to make him do anything? He has alicorn magic. The simple fact that the Lycans need greater weapons to fight magic, and that they had to state 'no magic' as a rule of honor for the duel means that they have no way to counter magic itself.
They apparently don't realize that the only reason Jethro went along with this farce is for his own sake. He doesn't want any blood on his hands, even despite the fact that these savages aren't worth the consideration. If he'd lacked any inkling against killing, then this would be over already. Actually, if he'd lacked any inkling against killing he'd have killed Rarity's kidnappers and sent Empress Amber their heads in a box as a message.
AH F**K! Stop with the cliffhanger!
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I’m predicting that there is a loophole in the law that says: “The losers life is in the claws of the winner” and it doesn’t actuelly specify that you have to kill them. You can, for example turn them to your servant.
The fight was good actually keep it up
cliffhanger.... dang you!!!!!
keep up the work!!!
Shouldn't there be a penalty for the one casting/interfering?
Without a penalty for the caster they could just help whoever they want to lose.
Later in the chapter this comes into play but with just regular interference instead of magic, the lycan dishonored himself which may or may not come with any punishment.
What are you talking about? That was a great action scene!
Granted, things moved fast, but life-or-death fighting usually does. So, it felt right. Good job.
Edit:
Forgot to mention...
Gemini looks to be very loyal, even if she has a one-track mind. So I wonder how she would answer this...
"Gemini, how does it feel to lay down your life for one with no honor, who lied to further their own agenda?"
Quick, Twilight, cast a helpful spell on Gemini!
Yeah, I think this rule might not work so well, unless the one casting the spell also suffers the same.
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Yeah sorry about that, nukes were a poor example. I should have said guns or crossbows instead but my point was that what was the point in telling them about our weapons if they are just going to declare war no matter what was what I was trying to say.
He can kick down a tree but a sword is to heavy for him.
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Yeah, author's given him godlike power on every front and then whenever any of it's actually useful, it vanishes.
EDIT: I feel like I should expand on this a bit to explain the thought. Do you know how much force it takes to uproot a tree? A quick google turns out the number 60 kN or ballpark of 13,000 pounds of force to just pull it out of the ground. Even if you half that, that's still 6,500 pounds of force. For comparison, a 50.cal bullet carries about 33 kN of force, again from a quick google. Now admittedly, that's so deadly because the impact point is so small but even spread to the size of a hand, that is "Decapitate someone with a punch" strength. It's not quite 'world of tissue paper' power, but the Earth Pony strength alone is enough to absolutely murder anything he encounters with pure physics.
It comes with the secondary power of withstanding that much force as well or he'd have shattered during that kick like cold rubber.
So even ignoring the power to basically be fucking god 8 hours of any given day, even ignoring the fact that Athena gave him the aspect of Hermes (and I dare you, name 5 different things Hermes is known for other than just flight) and then dumped whatever power she had left. EVEN IGNORING ALL OF THAT, we basically have Captain America on steroids getting his ass beat by everything that comes across him.
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To be fair
Yes, he did kick down a tree, with both his legs simultaneously, with all his power, he kicked down a dying tree
This became so stupid. The author should have stuck to the pony lands not any lycan lands. Where is his great strength, also not allowed to use magic is fing stupid magic is part of him therefore it is natural not being allowed to use it is complete donkey crap.