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Awww poor zecora
Nice
I like how the transformation ended up permanent, along with the very real and understandable reactions to said transformation. Changes of that magnitude are scary, especially if they come out of nowhere. I applaud you for your depiction of Zecora's emotional roller coaster and Jethro's understanding. Truly a wonderful chapter and I can't wait to see the amazing things that happen next. Also, I absolutely squealed in joy when I thought about Jethro's herdmates in wedding dresses and the heartache that only those types of events cause from over-indulgence in happiness and love. Keep up the amazing work and I look eagerly forward to the next installment.
Fantastic chapter as always sad to hear about the news with Zecora. But I've wanted to ask, how are you feeling lately? I know you said you felt burnt out in one of these chapters or the other story you got going on so I wanted to ask personally if your doing fine. If you are feeling burnt out you should look into a break of some kind. having constant updates for 2 stories can be draining at times for most authors nowadays. And could be damaging to your stories if you get too burnt out
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Mostly it’s the fact that I’ve written my character into a corner. I need to focus on him resolving a lot of the problems he’s facing before I can follow through on the other arcs I have planned for him.
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You should consider him facing each issue one at a time and not all at once or better yet let his friends handle some of his issues with/for him. I know It probably sounds easier said than done but I highly recommend that as I've seen stories from the past few years on this site do this with their MC and it becomes and issue with the entire story. the story will get caught in development with issues brought up with the MC and will be hindering the stories development itself from progressing the MC further into it. I'm not a genius on writing but this is the best advice I could give you in all honesty, I would love to see where the story goes but you should at least take a step back, think about how to go about solving Jethros many different issues, and take the best course of action. Again, not an expert just giving you the best advise a reader can give you, the author the best they can describe. wish you luck on it.
About time. That guy would have delayed setting a date for as long as possible.
Hopefully twilight isn't forced into a pair of wings too because she won't take that well.
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protagonists have that thing going on where they want to stubbornly handle everything themselves thing going on
Wait a minute... does this mean if Twilight ascends as she is now, she might get a permanent anthro form too?
Now here's a fun mental image... Gemini in either a bridesmaid's or wedding dress! ;)
aawwwweee, cute couple and mirage!!!!~
keep it up!!~
Put a foal in me now
Its te universes fault, let the universe decide. Write down a list then roll for it.
Just watch out for what you put for Critical fail and success.
Nice.
I'm upset I was wrong. Zecora isn't pregnant YET it's just dumb magic bullshit keeping her perma-human
Meanwhile in Pinkie Pie's lair. A disturbance in the force happens. In the dark shadows a evil grin is shown.
Meanwhile in the capital Princess Luna and Celestia wakes up with their hearts beating fast and with a cold sweat they can feel that disturbance in the force knowing that the world is going to change again.
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I agree that things were getting out of hand. I think you were beginning to experience the feelings your character had during the last chapter. Screaming because "a force of the universe" is making him go through so much. I'm glad that you recognize this, because now you can slow down and deal with things one at a time (like you did with this chapter).
There are so many romantic interests to resolve: Fluttershy, Twilight, AJ, Pinkie, Gemini, Luna, maybe Celestia. Wow. That is... a lot, to put it mildly. And those are just the ones I can remember. Maybe Sonata? It's just, so many.
Would it be good if some of them decided to have second thoughts... just to "thin the herd" as it were.
Then there are the rest of the plot issues: what happens with Chrysalis, the Sirens? They have also been transformed like Zecora, they also went through the same emotions, but they have nobody's shoulder to cry on.
Then there is dangling/unresolved story plots like: the permanent Stargate; exploring the "treasures of Aelyssia;" rebuilding Aelyssia; how have the phoenixes been doing; the Lycan Empire and Amber being a bitch (see what I did there?); visiting the deerfolk; Is Ember doing ok? Just to name the ones I can remember.
Feel free to take each person and story plot as an entire chapter (or two) that Jethro can work on.
I hope this doesn't come off as condescending, I love your story, I am just trying to help.
Most important, give yourself a break if you need it. And Jethro too, he needs it.
Thank you for posting.
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You are quite correct in that I am on the autism spectrum.
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Personally I find myself relating to Jethro more than any other hie I've enconterd despite having nowhere near the life experiences he has even before being hied
Even though I’m not a fan of Jethro I am reading it for the lore and worldbuilding.
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I doubt it because zecora needed that form to let the magic out or she would be hurt. Twilight has her horn for that.
So, they can make a spell to turn something into a human, but not the other way around? That's just a bit silly, I think.
great chapter
Why do you, end so many chapters with FUCK ?
Okay, wait a minute. They have an anthro spell, heck, they even created an artifact that makes the change semi-permanent but somehow don't know how to make a "feral" version?
Just use hair from Zecora brush or other zebra, nab a feather from Celestia, hell, even changelings are available to study their transformation.
Because at this point, at least to me, this whole anthropization of various characters is starting to feel forced.