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I can't help but think that something will go wrong and Spoiled will twist it around until it's unrecognizable.
great chapter
These references to other stories really throw me off, and pull me out of my immersion. The explicit references, anyway
Who knows maybe Jeth should go 'f it' and help Diamond be free of her karen of a mom
Unless something occurs to disprove it, Im gonna have to go with Lisa Simpson here.
Some villains are unredeemable, thats why theyre villains.
Im classifing Spoiled Rich as Eris class Rabid Karen.
She cant even accept that she is dead, because she demands she cant be.
I sigh. Allow me a moment to gripe, based entirely on my own personal preferences and upbringing. I'll try and keep this civil and constructive, and I apologize if you feel I failed to do so.
This started off fine with the singular romance subplot with Zecora, but, and this is probably my ingrained monogamous mind speaking here, the not-so-subtly increasing idea of the total harem ending is... In my opinion, over played. I don't know if this is original plans for Jethro, or if he's constantly flirting with every last mare he sees simply because he thinks he's being polite or something, but there is a limit to what's being polite and what's being flirtatious. Especially considering his trauma over his Trix. For someone who had been so against the idea of romance, he seems to have gone from "I can't have anyone else after her!", to suddenly, "Poke-mares, gotta catch 'em all!" I think if he'd have stuck to just Zecora, or maybe one other, one, you'd have been able to achieve the exact same thing, story wise, and not miss anything. The additional romance, intentional or not, just seems excessive. You've got good reason for romance with Zecora. I admit that freely. Scar is just a tease, but through that you've got Pinkie lined up and that... does make some sense. Luna makes sense, familiarity, shared interests, etc. I don't feel like anyone else that you've got romantically lined up have as stable reason for falling in love with Jethro atm. Maybe I'm just overlooking them due to my pre-dispositions.
I am familiar with the idea of self-inserts, intentional or not, and wish-fulfillment stories. Hell, the first thing I ever wrote was every terrible self-insert, wish-fulfilling trope story I've since found on this website. You've got advanced human knowledge, but the morals not to use them. You've got alicorn levels of magic, but no training to utilize it. You've got godlike power over the dream realm, but constantly don't use it for reasons I cannot quite remember at the moment. You've got wings, because flying is cool, even if it'd trigger the fuck out of my fear of heights, but don't have the wing strength to achieve very much flight. You've got knowledge of the future through the show, but have tossed everyone, characters and readers, into an alternate version just different enough that the future knowledge may not always be even remotely accurate. You've hit upon most of the common tropes that usually makes up a bad fic, but you've done a fairly adequate job of addressing, covering or bandaging them up. At the very least, you're doing way better than I did so many years ago.
All that in mind, I'm gonna keep reading through this, see what happens. At least, up until something happens that just rubs me wrong entirely, or I have a bad day on an uploaded chapter and just leave because of some little, insignificant thing.
This is going to backfire horribly isn't it.😬
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Spoiled is stubborn so whether she will be to give him a chance or not is something that is hard to figure out. Diamond mostly follows her mom's lead because she is probably around more. Dad is a important business pony and probably doesn't always have time for her. I hope that it works out for him.
Read a little into "Permanent Vacation". Sounds interesting, but with only 1-2 updates per year i think i don't start reading it.
I call it the 'spoiled' party :P
I have a sinking feeling for the party though.
keep it up!!!!~
But I am
This is why applejack is my favorite pony or best pony in my case
True
Oh, Applejack. It's not your forgiveness he needs. It's his own.
Oh wow I’m no expert in romance but that looked like a incredibly intimate gesture
GigaKaren pone gonna strike in the next chapter?
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Unfortunately finding peace and harmony is easier said than done. There are those who just want power over others to make themselves feel better and usually cause more problems than if they tried to be humble.
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And that movie is where I got part of my username. Love that movie.
"Welcome to Altair IV, gentleman."
Yay! All caught up!
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That was such an awesome flick! Aside from the hokey 50's outfits and some of the "music" for some of the scenes, the special effects and script was equal to, if not superior, to Star Trek TOS. The battle with the Krell nightmare beast is one that still gives me shivers of terror to this day, as well as awe and love for the quality of animation and sound engineering done for it! Roddenberry wrote in his autobiography that it was foremost in his mind when making his show. Of course, the story itself came from Shakespeare's "The Tempest"--now HE was a hell of a script writer centuries ahead his time!
Jethro, DON'T listen to Twilight when she says you're not a monster--you've SEEN the fight between her and Tirek!.
Even as "just a unicorn", the bloody obsessive compulsive, overpowered, prodigy mutant freak of nature twit is probably close to alicorn-level powers whenever she's trying to imitate a Goa'uld.
Then, after she becomes Twilicorn,
and Thor charges her up 400%, I mean, the other alicorns push all their power into her, Twilight literally gets punched THROUGH one of those mountains you're both talking about, and it doesn't even muss any of her feathers! Pony bitch meets ALL the definitions of "monster" in anyone's dictionary!And you're already ¼ of that, Jethro!
You're just one of the "good" monsters, is all.
So, be proud of that, boy!
Now, go forth and stomp some shit!
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That's one reason why I chose it, because in my school play, I played Prospero, who was the inspiration for Morbius.
the part where twilight teaches him posh eating reminds me of the scene from Kingsmen where Harry teaches Eggy about proper dining
You know, Jethro, you keep repeating that line...if Scarlet ever ascends to alicornhood, you have only yourself to blame for jinxing it.
I'd
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The alicorn of horny