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Nice
great chapter
There is so much good in this chapter.... that means something bad's going to happen . Still open Spike will call him dad. Chrysalis look so surprised what happened I guess Jethro got her heart pumping really fast with feelings
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i wonder if they'll start a betting pool to see whos the most tsundere. Dash or Chrysalis.
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I agree. It's like a roller coaster. After going up, you end up coming back down.
He shouldn't trust chrysalis yet in that present he gave to her she can have her revenge
Ludicrous Speed. NOW.
I've seen multiple grammar and spelling mistakes in this chapter.... But I'm not gonna tell you about any of them, have fun hunting for them!
it was probably the fae crown
Those were great gifts for everyone, but with my experience at RPGs, I have a bit of a concern when it comes to interdimensional doorways....
What happens to Twilight or anyone else if someone were to pull the corner of the portal while they're in the library? Will she be able to get out? Will she eventually run out of air or is time frozen inside until the door is opened again?
That's one gift-horse no one can afford NOT to take a good long look in its mouth!
Something he gave that fae ia going to be in next chapter I think
Great chapter keep it up!!!~
Nice. I wonder if any of his gifts will become plot relevant
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I’m reasonably confident that that crown he gave Chrysalis will, since out of all the items from the collection it’s the one major unknown quantity and could range from relatively innocuous yet still impactful (her own mother’s crown taken as spoils of war back in the day comes to mind as one possibility) to one of those artifacts of doom that the world of Equestria just seems to love have lying around.
As for the rest, well...Twilight’s and Zecora’s gifts and Scarlet’s and Rainbow’s new sets of armor have obvious “adventuring” applications, and Ember having the proper Bloodstone Scepter will just become a somewhat common sight if she does eventually decide to take the position (I think she will, but it’s still her call to make); the remainder I’m less sure about.
Oh, wow. And I thought "inhumanity" is the worst word to ponify. And yet here we are.