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If the next chapter picks up right where this one leaves off, I suspect Spoiled will shove her hoof ever deeper into her mouth by...for example, blaming Jethro's 'Everfree Freakiness' for Filthy's anger toward her. Which in turn, I imagine, will be the straw that breaks the camel's back, and Zecora will take her own shot at the bitch.
...So why does Spoiled think Jethro's a Creature of the Everfree Forest?
I just want Filthy just divorced her ass and just get it over with.
I'm loving this story soo far morbiusgreen.
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That's where his house appeared.
great chapter
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same
Hmm, one week without spoiled's influence. Wonder if thats enough for the Jeth to help the Crusaders open Di's eyes.
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That's where he and his house was dropped.
That was intense.
Imagine Spoiled actually having a change of heart, but knowing her, that’s really unlikely.
Some people just never change.
Whelp that was an expected result. While I don't see a way out of this without Diamond getting hurt, I think Filthy is starting to see Spoiled for what she is, and hopefully she'll either shape up due to being kicked out for a week, or else he'll sever things fully with her, if not only for his own sake, for Diamond's.
I did feel really bad for Diamond, all she sees is that a wonderful meal got ruined by her parents fighting. Hopefully she turns out all right after this. Might even have her redemption arc happen a lot sooner, simply due to the influence of Spoiled being taken away, though that does make me wonder about the Crusaders. Though I'm getting way ahead of myself there.
As for Spoiled, depending on her next actions, I can see a lot of possible futures for her... it's all up to her though.
Man I loved that show when I watched it in class.
Another good chapter as always keep up the good work.
Now what really peaks my interest it what will become of Spoiled next. She nearly destroyed her own relationship with her family over her own prejudice of Jethro. Seeing her having a redemption arc would be quite interesting but I already feel like you have a more interesting approach to how this will go.
One word about that ending....c.tenor.com/HypDHcRO1TgAAAAC/euphoria-zendaya.gif
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A sad but true fact of life
Wow, damn... Poor Diamond.
Good thing Jethros snarky self intelligent smartphone didnt suddenly start playing One Week, by Bare N=ked Ladies,
I really hope Spoiled doesnt take the Cake with Jethro.
I mean, she gets a Tart, and Diamond gets a Tartlet?
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I certainly hope so. As for work and play scientists have made it clear that both is the way to go for anything. Maybe bad seed won't happen if we're lucky. I hated that it took the float being boobytrapped for the adults to not only tell about the bullying on both sides and personally sometimes giving someone a taste of their own medicine is the only way to get through to them but that should always be the last resort. If applejack had spoken up which there was no reason not to in the first place then the fight wouldn't have happened. And who has been teaching this kid safety stuff like be cautious around strangers or it never okay for someone to bully and it okay to stand up for yourself. These are basic life rules that everyone needs.
I had a hunch things would go wrong but I didn't expect that. Nice work😄
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I think it more likely prejudice than anything else and since he seemly appeared out of it and nobody knows about humans and he admitted that we aren't perfect but I know we try sometimes to the right thing. Our leaders can be idiots at times but we have to live with them.
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I'm fully expecting her to go off on Zecora for being an "Everfree freak" for the same reasons, which will be when Jethro loses his patience with Spoiled.
But wouldn't it be funny if Spoiled is reminded that, technically, both Celestia and Luna also came from the Everfree? Wouldn't that make them "Everfree freaks", too?
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I agree with this comment, she is going to take a beating from ponies far and wide.
author, keep up the work!!!~
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More like...
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I am glad Filthy has a backbone and stood up to his wife. I also hope that Jethro will no longer try to sway/influence Spoiled. For Diamond's sake, I hope she learns a lesson from this, but probably not. As far as I remember, the show never showed if Spoiled was ever able to redeem herself.
I'm also glad that there were "third party" ponies present (the wait staff). The gossip will spread quickly on Spoiled being a racist (or would it be area-ist because she hates things from the Everfree).
Despite it not being Jethro's ideal outcome, I would consider this dinner an overall success.
I'm really happy that Jethro and Zecora got to "wow" each other. Nothing like seeing your loved one go gaga over you.
Then we have the Sir Jethro fan club to talk about. And how many branches are there?
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I think he was hoping that she would see that he wasn't a monster if she was forced to interact with him but unfortunately she wasn't willing to give him a chance and the evening was ruined.
Haven’t read it yet but I applaud you author, for getting 300k+ words out five months or so.
That takes dedication and a crap ton of inspiration, you have my respect.
a grate chapter and i see spoiled milk is living up to her name.
hum wonder how the divorce laws work there?
i cleaned my now X wife out of every thing.
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Love how "How horny is that mare" is a running gag at this point
What an absolute B!TCH.
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What do you expect of a Spoiled R(B)itch