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in the words of Master Piccolo. DOOOODDDDGEEE!
At least spike has learned a few things about his species considering twilight means well but she really needs to be there to help him understand his culture a little more than dragons breath fire and are fire proof. Ember I don't see the dragon from the show who defy her father and help save equestria. This Ember has been abused so much that she is wimpier than spike considering he grew up in a culture that values other things besides strength. I hope Jethro kicks the dragon lord butt.
great chapter
You forgot the most important part of the iconic of the Wild West as the guys squared off a tumbleweed rolls a cross between them. Be on your guard they're older and Fowler things and Orcs in the Deep places of the world
What an asshole
This Torch is going to get snuffed out.
This man torch is a goddamn C R E E P !
Propositions his own daughter
Makes a demand that he violate Celestia if he were to win
I'll say it again, Jethro this isn't My Little Pony! This is something else different entirely!
Torch, you have just sealed your fate.
The question is, will he try to become an Oathbreaker afterwards?
Volrif’nel? Any demand? Non negotiable? And I can challange any dragon, right?
...
-Hey Spike I challange you, I want to be The Dragon Lord as my prize!
-Wha..- *BONK*
-Okay, now I'm your master, go home suckers.
THE END
Hmm... correct me if l am wrong... but Jey never made his 4th demand.
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He technically didn’t have to.
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Jey: "My 4th demand is......... DRAGONS HAVE TO STOP BEING MASSIVE DICKS TO OTHER RACES"
Torch should be glad that Jethro isnt combat trained as he only needs 4 hits to win this fight in the worse possible way for Torch.
And torch only needs one hit in return.
Then again, Only need one hit on Torch to win, depending on how good Torch is at taking on gravity and the planet?
awesome chapter. and now we start.
So.....my only question is......When will we expect the fight chapter to come out
I’m not surprised that Fluttershy swore since she did in the show
Fun fact, the reason for this is to ensure neither man had the sun in their eyes.
Nope! Just the boys
That's only three. I expected the fourth be that he step down as dragon lord, if he survives.
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The Deerfolk.
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peeved is not a swear, it will never be a swear
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It’s not a swear to us but to them is is because when I saw the episode I saw a mother cover her child’s ears plus Shy covered her mouth
To MC about cloaks: they are impractical only if you don't know how to use them, it equires training.
They mask movement and body language, create cover against aiming from behind, they can be used as distraction or feint. Against fencing weapons they can be used as a deflecting tool.
Nice
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I'll keep that in mind.
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To be fair, I never knew what it had in it until people here pointed it out. Therefore Jethro didn’t know either.
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That was a very small part of the over all comment. The Author got his act together as the story progressed, but the earlier chapters really don't portray a a normal persons responses. If you read the current three chapters and compare them to the early ones, there is a night and day difference. The early character is portrayed very over the top. Emotional responses are over exaggerated and he really does come across as if there were something wrong with him. Where a normal person would be frightened, the character is terrified, where a normal response would be worry, the character is paranoid and almost catatonic, This, however is all in the past. The current portrayal shows an emotionally stable and realistic person.
If you don't politely point out the mistakes, the Author can't strive to improve.
Monk
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Not the Sunsword, a saber or cutlass he picked up.
You're consistent uploads with this good quality is almost inhuman. Keep it up!
Out of curiosity if you put the swords together does that mean it's the eclipse blade?
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but would it be a lunar or solar eclipse?