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great chapter
Well. That would definitely get Celestia's attention real quick. I do like how you've changed Eris from canon, really makes her seem more of a threat since she isn't all goofy and messed up.
things are moving
Another amazing chapter doing keep up the good work
Isn't Shining Twilight's brother?
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Typo. Will fix.
Jeth, the hell. And all that talk about not wanting to kill earlier. And Jeth, Sunset needs to stay in 'human' World to protect it from the Dazzlings!
Probably the best chapter thus far, real good work! My only wish would be for Jethro to argue more for Twilight’s unprepared state for accepting immortality, and how blatant manipulation isn't the best way to prepare someone for accepting a crown.
Wow. This is a big change!
It feels like the entire setting/mood of this story just changed. Changed to what, remains to be seen.
I find it a bit ironic that the author has to literally tell the readers that this is an alt-u, but I understand trying to head-off certain comments.
This means that anything and everything can now happen. And I can't wait to see how Eris is depicted in this story.
100% all for the "bigger bust." The dude approves.
Lovely to see the Sisters getting everything out in the open. A lot of hurt was avoided and a lot of healing was administered. Because they are discussing the Tantabus now and perhaps eliminating it, does this mean we will avoid that episode? If so, this means there will be no Princess Big Mac.
I wonder what was the energy that Jethro felt flow through him? I can only guess that it was very positive.
I'm still waiting on Gemini to get to Ponyville. I want to get her take on the way these "prey" live. And what will she even be doing at Sunny Acre?
Great chapter!
Very interesting, curious what that feeling that flowed through him was. The sisters love for each other being allowed to be felt by each other or something else? Guess we’ll just have to wait and see until then great story still and can’t wait to see more!
Nice
Reformed Discord triggers a whole bunch of stuff in the show, but will Eris even be anywhere as helpful?
Another four seasons of total chaos, and has he seen Episode 100 yet, given he didnt recognise Vinyl? Becasuae I thought that was the episode where Bon Bon stated she was Sweetie Drops? then theres Kevin Im only here for the food Changeling?
Interesting change of things, Eris from the comics is definently a bigger threat. Though personally I like Cosmos more because of all the villains that showed up in the comics, she was the one that truly made it feel hopeless for the main cast.
Also, calling it now the Guardian of the Lycans was another human.
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If anything happens to bacon hair horse waifu I shall be sad and disappoint in thou
Woah, keep it up!!~
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Well she and Celestia definitely do need to work on their issues. They both played a part in what happened and right or wrong stay or go they definitely need to talk about it. Of sunset will avoid the issue until forgotten friendship comes up. The rainbow humbled her but maybe a little too much. Before she was confident in her opinions even if she was wrong but after that she had no backbone without her friends. And personally the Anon-a-Miss incident was lesson that he definitely needs to be involved in. Sunset could have used someone by her side and the school needed to understand how bad things could have gotten to if the cmcs hadn't confess. As for making twilight take over maybe move a little slower than in the show and show how you do things and remind her that if she believes she has another way that is better then go for it. And don't be afraid to ask for help from those around you. She never seemed to get much experience with other leaders and that is going to be an important part of her job in the future. She barely knew any leaders.
Damn it, Celestia. Jethro is just a man, and still somewhat young, so I can understand him. But you should know better than this. Now, one of two things will happen. One, things will play out exactly like they did in the show and Sunset Shimmer's, Discord's, and Starlight Glimmer's redemptions are now up in the air, where if you just ignored that information things would have ended up for the better. Or two, things will be different and all your planning will be for nothing.
Eris goddess of strife and discord...or Discordia to the Roman's. Love the look! Kinda reminder me of Shirath from AFK arena
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Correct. Fixed.
You could go with the popular song, "The wolf" by Siamés
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And I don't think he gotten to starlight or the storm king or anyone after starlight. Discord was idiot but it seem like he wanted to hurt anyone he just wanted to have his idea of fun which was no fun for anyone else unfortunately eris sounds a lot meaner than Discord and more willing to hurt others.
Now hold up... I thought Jethro only reached S3 finale and the first EG movie... how come he knows what the Tantabus is, that thing doesn't make an appearance until S5?!
Okay so I read the chapter and sorry about my previous comment, but anyway, I have a mini-theory that the Guardian is an ancient human, probably not one that has seen or knows of the MLP show to rename the Diamond Dogs as Lycans. Other than that, now its understanable how this world's version of the Spirit of Chaos turned the other alicorns into murderous entities, to the point of banishment to another world - DIscord is more softer kind of chaos, maybe to the point of insanity to all his hijinks, but Eris is the destructive form of chaos so I can see how she would bring her world to an absolute hell-hole. I wonder if Discord will make an actual appearance or not?
Besides that, I wonder what other changes will be made to the story compared to the show? And what other mysterious will be revealed to Jethro?
I mean, Celestia does have a terrible habit of leaving highly dangerous artifacts out in the open, and incredibly powerful villains unsupervised (regardless of imprisonment status.)
Not only would execution protect the world from repeat attempts at destruction or enslavement, but dying outright is probably a kinder punishment than the thousand year prison sentences that get thrown around all willy-nilly in the show.
Good! At least Jethro DID have some sense to warn them!!
Now, if Jethro had bothered to take a look at some of the fanfic here, he should have seen how folks like Mark Wells, Blank Page, and several others had dealt with the likes of Tirek and the Storm King. He could consider their solutions, or ask the CMC to come up with some ideas--like perhaps an M134 Vulcan Minigun 7.6mm firing nullstone projectiles, phasers, flying magic-seaking buzz saws, Tesla coil powered scarecrows, or something else lethally useful .......
BTW: TBH, I'm not sure about what to feel about Eris. I've never read any of the comics, so I don't know how she differs from DisQord.
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He might have to suggested that in the future right at this point he trusting Celestia knows what she doing.
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Picture is not one true visage of Eris... comic Eris was separate alien entity, an eldritch creature from TOS far more powerful than Discord. They managed to defeat her with his help and then he erased eveyone's memory of her deeds (some of which he was guilty in too) and how she was trapped and was turned into a statue. I suppose actual discord is imprisoned somewhere here.
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By the way who are the others. Considering I read mark wells and blank page I'm curious about the rest.
I think 1 of the 2 needs to be changed
You know, them just glossing over forcing Twilight to become immortal still bugs me. Like "Congratulations, you became an Alicorn. Because we essentially forced this upon you, you are now immortal. You will be forced to watch everyone you know and love grow old and die (excluding other immortals), while you remain unaging. Have fun with that."
Do I vaguely remember him playing music for Vinyl in an earlier chapter?
Not sure, but I might take a look back.
Found it, chapter 13. Although she was described only by appearance and neither spoke nor was named. This was during the conversation with Lyra.
Chapter 13 extract: