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Just how many hundreds of chapters is this story gonna have by the end? There's still Gemini, Luna, Pinkie Pie and probably a few others in the future that are still to join the herd/pack/harem, plus there's also children to talk about since he's part alicorn (and pretty much anything can be waved away with magic).
I thought Gemini was going to join them in this chapter. Guess I have to wait and see.
Not bad not bad at all it was a great chapter thank you for it
I have to say, this "encounter" was long overdue.
And I know you are self deprecating when it comes to action scenes and sex scenes, but you did quite a good job in this one. It seemed reasonably paced and easy to follow. Scenes with multiple partners are complex and can get confusing easily with many different parts all moving around. But you did great leading the reader from one act to the next.
Hell, I would like you to do more of these scenes. It's a great way that the characters can physically express their love for each other. And it came through in this chapter.
Also interesting that he takes it easy with Scarlett, but gets rough with Zecora. Quite different than their normal interactions were Jethro treats Zecora with deep understanding and gentleness.
And Scarlett, being quite meek in the bedroom, but puts on a horn dog (and inappropriate) attitude everywhere else.
I'm glad that, even in a sex scene, you still have this character building.
Thank you for posting.