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How long'd it take you to come up with something that fit that alladin song, but wasn't only like two changed words?
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Like...a couple of minutes at the most?
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Yeah...I still don't particularly like it, but thanks!
Something's telling me Celestia has ulterior motives she let her sister use the anthro form to get Jethro attention and a dress that would look extremely good on Luna then she tells them that Luna may have feelings for him. Jethro has been told he has the makings of a ruler I think Celestia is trying to get Luna and Jethro together
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I guess I'm just terrible at making silly songs, then. I gave up trying to do something with a rarity theme.
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"Lady Rares, stallions all stare, Lady Rarity! Fashion queen, trots on the scene gallantly!"
Or if you don't like Lady Rares, you can go, "Gorgeous mare."
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Yeah, see, all I had was "Rarity, fabulous she"
"Prince ali" seems to have 3 syllables and so does "rarity" and that's basically all I had
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Cadance: Hey, um...Jethro? How does one...um...you know...?
Jethro: Sighs Fuck in the Anthro form you're currently standing in without any clothes?
Cadance: Ah, yeah...sorry.
Jethro: Lemme introduce you to this lovely stuff called porn.
In short, Rainbow Dash's style of subtlety.
Celestia needs to slow down on the culture changes that this guy has to deal with. He already had to deal with another planet plus different cultures and many things that different from earth and just started falling in love with zecora maybe she should let Luna and him decide if they are going to be more than friends or not. I know she just wants to protect her but I don't think Luna would want that sort of protection. She is trying to get use to whole new world in a lot of ways and he is trying to be a good friend to her and help her as much as he can under the circumstances.
I love the fact you have him so unsure still after the conversation ended with Celestia shows how conflicted he really is, a good few have him leaning more towards accepting after their conversation with another pony be it their best friend there or one of the sisters however Luna best princess and I want herd to happen! Plus it’s always such an adventure when the MC ends up making a herd so even more story to have cause of it! Anyways awesome two chapters and again I vote Yay on herd happening :P
The herd is starting to form with first Luna then flutter shy, next who knows oh I am going to enjoy this but also
I fucking called it and knew it
Cadence prepare the love artillery and load the love shells and prepare to fire!
I still love the story.
I wonder what those princess medallions do... specifically. Do they let him walk in to the palace at-will (guards won't bother him)? Give him something like diplomatic immunity? Allow him to buy stuff duty-free? Save 25% of his income taxes?
Regarding this chapter, I do have one question:
How?
If this is a crush, I can understand. Jethro has done news-worthy stuff, maybe she likes his looks.
But Celestia explains that it's more than a crush. Luna and Jethro haven't been around each other very much so how does Luna know she'll like him in that way? Zeccora and Jethro's attraction developed naturally and grew being around each other over time. This didn't happen with Luna.
Maybe I missed something somewhere.
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this got a laugh out of me also great chapter
Keep up the work as always!!!~
Oh dear, far in the future, this could lead to an intresting meeting between Miss Blue, and Miss Mulberry?
Will Jethro save the fan music Nightmare Night for after, or give Luna a heads up before? reduce the suprise, reduce the immediate reaction?
I mean,
Jethro:Nightmare approach.
Zecora:What do you mean, Nightmare approach.
Jethro:On a Thestral drawn sky chariot.
Zecora:Open fire. All pumpkin cannons. Dispatch Big Mackintosh to bring back her body.
I wonder if Jethro will ever meet more Griffins than in the show, given show ones had a wide range of forms. Biggest current carnivor is Liger or Polar Bear, but Equestria can blend Mythical, and there were even larger carnvors and avians long ago?
Luna, Celestia, Gilda introduces General Vultan?
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I don't mind the idea of the princesses being with him but maybe he needs a break from changes for a while. He had a lot of them. But I think there was a spark of attraction towards Celestia and he does care about Luna as friend and that can always become more.
"I don't want a harem" Said no one ever. Jeth don't be a pansy, live your fantasy!
Time skip again or interludes/non canon episode snippets?
did he forget to tell celestia about her tree?
Glad he's not leaping into the whole Herd thing headfirst like so many other stories do. As someone with actual experience in poly relationships they're a bloody mess and seeing these 'Harem' stories rub me way the wrong way unless they're done VERY right.
I just finished reading the story over the past couple of days, and I'm really enjoying it so far! I'm surprised with how much you've written and published in such a short amount of time. I'm definitely looking forward to more, whenever it might come around.
Nice
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I can see your points to that idea.
Jethro should count himself lucky that the best princess AND best pony is romantically interested in him
You can't. Maybe for ponies it's possible, but for humans, that's not something that has ever worked. Ever. There are always favorites in a polygamous relationship. Anyone who tells you otherwise is either lying or a fool.
True love does not lie in the outward admiration, but in the admiration of the inner world and the strong resonance and sublimation of feelings.
A young man and woman from love and marriage to white hair and old age, need to spend a long time, only when both sides are like-minded, struggle for lofty ideals, will make the fire of love never extinguished, maintain the happiness of the family.
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There's another option that no one's brought up yet: Zebras don't live forever, alicorns do (unless killed by external forces--age isn't such a killer); Sooner or later, Zecora dies just like his Beatrice, leaving Jethro in the same boat he rode in on when he arrived in Equestria. With Luna, he has the opportunity to have a mate who can live as long as he would.
If he doesn't feel he can give equal attention to Zecora and Luna at the same time, there's always the future to look forward to. On the plus side of that depressing thought, Zecora can at least TELL him before she dies to go unfuck himself after her funeral, and give her blessings to him and Luna getting hitched!
Not very subtle, Celly.
Jethro is very prone to irrational emotional outbursts and it’s hard to read sometimes. It could just be a preconception in my noggin, but characters suddenly shouting or getting pissed off over one or two near harmless or attempted supportive sentences always throws me for a loop.