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Nice
oooo ship nice
I was hoping for Father and Son kind of love
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Who knows? Maybe it’ll morph into that.
This'll be quite the experience for young Spike, that's for sure! Little dude has balls of steel to do what he did. Jethro should've known that the kid would never abandon those he cares about, I mean did he not watch the first few minutes of the human version special? Man ran through the mirror anyways despite what Celestia said. He's a loyal little fucker! 👏🏿
Twilight's quite little "I love you" to Jethro is just something so sweet. And I thought how Shy confessed wouldn't be topped in the battle of cuteness!
Off topic but I'm still wondering what that little love of Celestia's was that kept her from getting completely drained. My 1 brain cell is screaming about that comic in which she's in love with some nice alternate dimension version of that dark grey horse guy but my second cell is screaming JETHRO! I mean you see the chemistry between those two! I don't know man. It could be anything she held dear!
Get ready for a side quest that'll have my emotions out of wack! Can't wait for the next chapter!
Dragon and ship? These are two things that I don't normally associate with each other. Bet there is an interesting backstory here.
Ah this is where the ancient dragons did their shipping. No wonder dragons are so cranky nowadays.
Jeth acquired and equipped "Ceremonial Sword" - A sword well preserved from the ravage of time, oddly pristine blade used by officers and decorative display. It's sharp enough
Spike was given "Cadet's Sword" - A gladius used by recruits back in the day. It's untarnished blade gleamed at the young drake's uncertain claws.
That's why GG had staff, it's more convinient than tiring arm by holding it out.
I reserve the right to don a tinfoil hat if that ship is the USS Eldridge.
Early first draft:
Very intresting how useful weapons just happen to be lying there, makes me think of how the Tree Of Harmony likes to do things in the background?
So many boat names to choose from. Not going to go with the cursed triplets, Icebergs an all that, and to find something that isnt there, cant get worse than The Mists Of Travelon?
wont that just send him to celestia
I have a feeling spike will be grounded when they get back from this adventure. I am hoping that he takes care of more of the show problems and not just the villains.
Figured I’d point this out. I’m no expert, but one of those ‘left’s doesn’t seem right.
It’s the paragraph near the end of this chapter, just to help you find it later if you plan on adjusting it.
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Writing late at night and no editor will do that. Fixed. Thanks bro.
Why Skype?
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Twilight has an older 2010 laptop with Windows 7. Wonder if it could handle Discord?
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It can trust me, I have a crazy old laptop that can run discord
Hmm...maybe Celestia and Luna are the latest reincarnations of eternally reincarnating manifest spirits of the sun and moon, and the dragons in that mural are their previous lives? Either that or dragon-kind was lied to by their old rulers. If it's the latter, then it'd be fun to have the rug pulled out from under Torch when he finally realizes that his belief that dragons are the mightiest species is a false idea born from an ages old con.
But if it's the first, it'd be interesting if the Sunsword remains imprinted on the manifest spirit of the sun, now housed in the physical form of Celestia.
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I reserve the right to do the same if it is instead the Borealis.
just to ask is it a ship or a submarine he found?
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my votes on a vase inside the belly button of a dragon statue.
oh lord something from earth in equestria?
keep it up!!!~
You wouldn't happen to be following Fire and Steel, would you?
intriguing.
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I have no idea what that is.
why would there be a ship in the middle of a ruin?
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It's one of my stories that did the exact same thing, with dragons being the original stewards of the world and even controlling the sun and moon.
great chapter
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Aaah. Maybe I'll look into that.
About Edit 5. I call bullshit. You've pumped out a story with nearly 500k words in just half a year? You're a really good author to be able to do that regardless of what the quality may be. I'll give you another review after I'm done reading. Should be in a few hours.
Can you imagine the talk a sexual neurotic would give to someone? Oh to be the fly on that wall.
Poor Spike. 😝
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