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Unlimited power do it. They stole my precious. Have you saw the icing problem icing problem might want to look into it. I can't feel bad for chrysalis just wants to bring back her people from near Extinction
RIP Thorax, you were merry and gay when no one else was.
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Yeah but holding on to a petty grudge is not going solve anything. Both sides say the other started the fight between the dragons and changelings. They need to work on leaving the bad blood behind and finding a new way. Nothing ever changes when you follow the same path over and over. I hope he will be all right and thorax can bring a new future to his people like in the show.
If the frost and lack of air didn't kill her, the terminal velocity crash will. Also ouch, Jeth is such a reckless bastard.. hope he enjoys third degree burns.
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As someone so familiar with human culture, particularly western media, Scarlet really ought to be aware of this one.
Gotta say though, the whole fight with Chrysalis hasn't been exciting. It's... predictable and kinda boring. OP antagonist, taunting their target the whole time, nothing works, smug beyond belief while our protagonists struggle futilely. All in hopes for the big triumph at the end.
That's not an exciting fight to me, that's cliche. The fight in the Lycan Arena was much more enjoyable than this has been. Then again, I suppose I've never been fond of big braggart enemies.
I'm trying to decide whether that bit at the end was vision failing from lack of air finally catching up to the brain, or something more. The way it's written it could be either way. If it is something more, I'm trying to place red and orange...
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He may not be dead yet. Let us hope by some miracle he survived.
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The things I can think of that are red and orange off the top of my head are Garble, Sunset, and Eve. Maybe Big Mac, but he hasn't really played a big part in this story so far.
i think you did really good with the battle scene.
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Hmm.... Could Sunset have finally reached apotheosis?
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Maybe... It's not likely, but maybe it was Day Breaker?
The power of friendship will give me the power to defeat you
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No need to wonder where your god is, chrysalis, because he's right here! But unfortunately, he's fresh out of mercy.
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*Solved
That’s one way to take care of a bug. Also you may say the fight was meh but I found it alright and enjoyable. Keep up the awesome work!
Not gonna lie, I was worried that Scarlet was gonna take something worse than just a cut, and possibly trigger Jethro's "Legion" side.
I still think it was rather good! I could clearly follow each action and every blow.
Sorry I felt compelled to change the story a bit....
Wake up, Jethro! Wake up! Part of my mind fought back, but the other part thought why would I want to fight against pure joy and bliss? She’s a Fae! More than that, a High Fae!
Fight it! FIGHT IT!
Why fight the inevitable?
Because... she ..... doesn't have ..... breasts!!
She can give us anything we want. A throne. Prestige beyond our understanding. Even breasts.
But she can't give us natural tiddies!
Something tells me that Chrysalis is still alive.
One thing that is bothering me: where the hell is everyone else? Celestia, Luna, Zecora, the mane 6, EVERYONE, keeps telling Jethro that he's not alone and "we're here for you!"
When he faces one of Equestria's most dangerous villains, only two freinds show up. I'm giving passes to all the princesses, Shining, and Twilight. But I hope everyone else was doing something more important.
Oh wait, probably fighting the rest of the Fae, and finding Celestia. Carry on.
The fight was mediocre. Also I feel Jethro should’ve put a much better fight than this, but it is what it is.
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I had not considered that.
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The only reason I even suggested her is because thought of her ponies being hurt could have put her on the edge, and seeing Jethro in that condition might have pushed her to the breaking point
Should have at least give her another zork with the lightning before releasing her.
Now, Chrysalis is another Marvel/DC supervillain that you can NEVER assume is finally dead--she'll be back!
THEY ALWAYS COME BACK!!!