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Very nice. Glad Eris got what she deserved.
I hate Eris in this story.
Jethro is a good man. He was protecting the ponies and those he cared about. Eris twisted that.
I love how you can create a persona of a character that I despise. No offence to you, I'm impressed.
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Then I did my job correctly.
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Indeed you did.
Could you perchance look at or read my stories? I really like your works as a writer. You have my respect, Morbius.
Though Jethro has the powers of the Greek gods, do you believe in them?
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I don't believe in the Greek pantheon, no.
And I'll have a look-see at your stories.
Now this is that in here for the chaos. The hate and the pain. I am very much looking forward to the next few chapters dealing with this sexy demons fallout.
Nice
good chapter
Ooo the fallout here will be very interesting can’t wait to see all the nonsense that spills out cause of this bitch.
She didnt get to Hard Reset, because that would mean she had lost?
oh no
he said the meme.
Also this isn't the meme but it fits well
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everyone I can say that I looked forward to the fallout of this but maybe it will possible allow the equstrian military to advance in technology and tactis. Also calling it now she gave him Chaos powers or my theory acutally.
And this line alone has made my day
Also this is for when more guns are developed in equstria
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I wonder how eris is going to be a pain in the ass next chapter
Imagine how'd they'd react to your human and you series or the fall of Equestria ones.
Oof. I got to admit that is some grade chaos right there. On the plus side, Eris could've shown the planet Rule 34. Could you make that a side chapter in Cloaked Heart's side stories?
I worry that this was seen by everyone. That they saw the sudden revelation of modern firepower brought to bear, and utterly unloaded on Eris. A genie that can't be put back in the lamp.
And that the Darker side of human nature, its sadism, barbarism, cruelty, and sheer fucking brilliance and cleverness to make the Darkest of fictions into reality.
And even if Eris got what was coming to her, this escalation of stature and importance to global politics the longer Jethro exists just shot past the moon. Even if it's uncharacteristic of Jethro to be cruel, and be the worst his kind has to offer, the fear of otherwise might make him into a pariah, another Eris. One that might turn to using Dark powers just to stay alive in a world that now fears and hates him, and wishes to see him extinguished.
This is far from over. And yet again you gave me that itch to intervene when I knew that it's fiction. And even if I could change that, what could I really do?
Ugh. Love reading. Hate reading. Being a passive spectator with no capacity to induce change sucks. This is why I like videogames.
Thanks for the PR nightmare Eris. And great she shown them grimdark universes.. oh one way to do damage control. Show them other fanfics.. like Past Sins.
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I have similar problems. As a writer, it takes every last shred of willpower I have not to pull out some kind of plot armour or deus ex machina which'll suddenly make everything alright. As I read, that's usually what ends up happening in my head, is some BS Deus Ex Machina appearing and giving the ultimate "Okay, no, sorry you're done. Back in the box with you." I know with everything I am that this conflict is how characters improve, adapt and develop, and by adding in that DEM, I rob the characters of that development, which just leads to dry, bland characters.
(Gaston's voice)
So it time to take some action...
It's time to follow me!
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I was wondering if someone would get the reference.
"Through the mist, through the woods, through the darkness and the shadows, it's a nightmare, but it's one exciting ride!"
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Man I am concerned about the fallout to all this. So not only that they've been exposed to exceedingly dark things, but beyond that we've still got the Sirens in some odd form hanging around, Jethro here has been hit with something, the world at large now knows about the alternative version of their world.
It's a giant mess and I'm not sure how things are going to go from here.
ayyyy.
close enough!
Oh god, that’s a twist!!!
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Don't worry about the Sirens, they got Sunset and the rainbooms
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Poniville spa treatment
She's a hell of a lot like quite a few of the current politicians of this world--the real beings doing all the damage, who then blame the citizens they're making suffer, and even go so far as to claim they themselves are the "victims" of the very citizens they're causing to suffer.
Oh, and one more thing....
Didn't Jethro come from 2022? So, he MUST have seen this while he was back in his home world:
ALWAYS, go for the HEAD!!!
Welp, I was right about him shooting her. Although I get the feeling she allowed it.
Eh. Eris, you’re not exactly one to talk here -- any idiot with enough power can go “Mwahaha, see how evil I can be!” and “Tremble before my gratuitous overuse of brute force!”. I’ve yet to see any evidence that you’re actually smarter than the Discord from the show (you know, the one that as far as this story is concerned some humans must’ve come up with?), and you’re certainly showing less imagination.
This has just turned into a steaming pile of garbage. I'm sorry but I can't continue after this. I lost ninety percent of my interest when he went to Alt-Earth but now I'm just disgusted. So good luck with your stories and future projects but I have to leave.
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This story DOESN'T have happy endings, and the writer enjoys bringing TOO much damn darkness into a once-beautiful story.
I wash my hands of ANY story you write.
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in a word: WEAK
you and confusedsage are hating the tiger for not being a dog, this is not a slice of life story, it was never planned to be good times good vibes. for there to be any substance in a long-form adventure story, there needs to be conflict, and conflict needs stakes, stakes that sometimes require the protags getting curb-stomped.
(tangent incoming)
if anyone has the time or more importantly the mental endurance, I would recommend The Lost Element, nearing 4 million words with nearly 200 chapters, each longer than most stories on this site, the characters get put through the fucking wringer but surprisingly rarely die or deviate from their core personality, it hits emotional and conceptual extremes all over the board and is still good after 12 years in progress. the discord arc in particular is difficult to read in the best way possible, if you aren't a pussy. if you do read the story you will cry point blank period, in joy, sorrow, and anger
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(Help by google translate)
Because it seems like you've already read this novel. So, please allow me to ask you something. I am currently reading this story. and stuck in the discord arc Because the protagonist of the story is......... pussy.
I've tried reading this episode at least 3 times and really can't finish it. One of the things I believe is Statistics never lie And this novel has come a long way (I think 12 years is really a long time), so it made me interested in this novel. But the author's attitude from more than ten years ago made everything difficult. Now, I would like to ask you whether this novel was worth my time and effort. Or at least when will Jem act like a real person?
thank you