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A nice simple chapter very good
good chapter
Now you've done it.
Jesus the way Sunset went off about Celestia, you would've thought she did the unthinkable. To her what she did was unthinkable! Downright fucked up even!
Gotta admit that the line about cake was hilariously out of pocket tho 😅
Truly this is an alternate universe of which it says "Fuck all that friendship shit!" & to "get real"
I like it! Sunset better grow a pair & get to listening! Bitch pulled a gun on my dawg Jethro! Can't be having that shit! That's grounds for an ass whooping! (...or not given a funny little joke in EQG that implies she may be into that shit 🤣 )
That could’ve gone better.
Woah. Caught up again.
It's a good take on the EQG universe being more Earth like than one would think.
And I can understand Sunset's behavior completely. She went through the mirror and even with the journal she had with her Celestia did not reply to her.
Maybe because she thought that when the portal closed, that communication between the books was cut too and she discovered Twilight before the thirty moons were over and she could use the mirror and book again and was too caught up with Twi to remember to try to connect with Sunset again.
When JB reminded her she was distraught about it and couldn't bring herself to reply to Sunset for she had basically forsaken her and left her to rot in that alternate reality.
It's absolutely understandable that Sunset got bitter over time and spits on Celly every time she can get.
Would be quite funny to see JB using his own smartphone, having downloaded the EQG2 song against the sirens to help her a bit back on track.
Also I thought you could maybe want some more songs for some ponies. If you don't have em yet.
Griffin village with Summer for Lyra and Bon Bon
Wooden Toaster with Beyond her garden for Carrot Top
Sherclop Pones with Pinkies brew
Collab ft. Heir-of-rick with la da de (pmv)
Hope to see much more in the future. This story is very nice.
Dragon
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Yeah I always thought that she should have at least wrote in the book. Maybe nothing would happen but if you never try you will never succeed. And with Luna back surely she could visit for a bit. The nobles won't like it but it will teach them how to behave better.
Oh dear, Sunsets turned into a 3 yeard old killing machine. No way will this end well without some stakes.
Nice
Now we just wait to find out that it's all secretly the sirens singing a silent song upon an altar of blood in which even the smallest of pains are gashed open to the air.
I'm enjoying this take of Sunset Shimmer.
And I think it's going to be worse before it gets better.
If I were in Jethro's piston, I would have ended this mission when a gun was pointed at his head. That's it, not worth dying for.
But that doesn't make for a terribly exciting story. So I'll be eagerly waiting for the next chapter.
Let's start it....
Jethro writes in the journal, "Dear princess Celestia. We found Sunset Shimmer! However, she really doesn't like you. She held a weapon to my head and threatened to kill me. Say 'hi' to Luna for me. Your friend across alternate universes, Jethro."
Yo I am loving this chapter so glad that you're not getting burnt out from popping a chapter out every now and then another commenter made a point about saying like how maybe it's the sirens that are making you know everyone go angry at each other I like where they went with that it would make sense too this means sunset shimmer literally lives on an island where aggression is a horrible thing so she probably be like a smorgasbord of like negative energy could also be how she managed to get such a nice living arrangements and my question to you is have you read the comics because it states that Star swirl would normally throw you know threats to Equestria through the gate it's the world that's not supposed to have magic so you know they wouldn't be doing much harm but well you know how it goes you throw enough of something in there it starts to contaminate the other places literally it's like nuclear waste a little bit will not really harm the environment but if you keep dumping s*** there it'll eventually you know make it toxic
keep up the work!!!
I'll be honest. This dipshit forces his way into her home, refuses to leave, threatens her with deportation, continues to take no for an answer, refusing to leave unless she goes with him and he is surprised that a single woman alone in her apartment pulled a gun on him?
I would have pulled a gun also. What would you do in that situation. I also would have called the police.
Let's say you moved from another country and living under the radar as a illegal alien in a better country, then ten years later after your living a comfortable life, some lackey shoves his way into your house and tells you your going back and he isn't leaving without you. Someone powerful wants to "Talk to you".
What would you do?
Monk
"Mavis, for crimes against royalty, I hereby sentence you to the sushi bar!" the judge said, as chains wrapped around her, and dragged her away." -darkmage1997
He had the book. “If you’re not willing to talk face-to-face, would you be willing to correspond?” He didn’t try to compromise?… Or what about asking Sunset for her perspective? Maybe she’d have been willing to give her side of the story before opening up negotiations… maybe MC could have asked Sunset if the princess could give her some token to show her willingness?
Jethro my boy. Wtf. No plan does what?