What do you when you discover your student crossed dimensions when you were not home?
You let her stay for a few more days, of course.
Starlight Glimmer jumped through the portal to discover and embrace a whole new world with her new friend, Sunset Shimmer. Together, they saved the day from evil magic. But now the real fun begins.
Starlight and Sunset are going to spend the next few days doing normal teenage activities. Have a sleepover, play some video games, debate who was the better villain...
Wait, what was that last one?
Review: Light Heart101
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Chapters (2)
Great read! Can't wait for more this is awesome
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Thank you so much!
This story interesting and can't wait to see more
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Thank you, Ocellus!
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Welcome
This was a nice opening chapter. There were several miss used words but some were just missing a couple of letters to make them the right word.
Looking forward to the next chapter
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Thank you for the comment. And I’ll recheck the chapter, just to be sure.
Pfft, we all know Twilight was holding back.
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That’s... debatable. I just really wanted Sunset to be impressed at Starlight’s skills.
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And she can be. If Twilight really was holding back, no one in-universe aside from Twi ever knew.
https://www.fimfiction.net/group/924/i-just-want-a-comment/thread/487739/in-which-starlight-discovers-the-wonders-of-the-human-world
I liked it well enough so far (chapter one) but I don't usually rush to comment on unfinished stories.
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True that.
If you wish, we could discuss it in a PM. If you want to, of course.
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I see. Well, in any case, the story should be over in about... two weeks, give or take. All the chapters are already finished and ready to publish. Just waiting for this one to gather more attention.
Great introduction, I'm looking forward to more. :)
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Thanks!
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You're very welcome.
Here's a review of your story, and is this story finished or did you submit it for review before finishing it?
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I submitted it before it was finished. Is that... not allowed?
Oh, and thanks for the review!
This was an interesting start, and I’m curious to see how Starlight and Sunset help each other work through their lingering guilt. It was a nice touch to have Starlight confused about human stuff. I usually enjoy seeing commonplace things through an outsider’s perspective.
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Thank you for the comment!
I think you mispelled that.
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Oh, I did. Thanks.
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Happy to help.