I Just Want a Comment 3,684 members · 15,753 stories
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Hiya, lovely peeps!

Behold my latest work!

EA Different Dimension
Starlight Glimmer: skilled unicorn with a history of evil. Sunset Shimmer: skilled unicorn also with a history of evil. Both of them alone and unsupervised in another dimension. This is gonna be great!
Uz Naimat · 5k words  ·  28  3 · 1k views

Yesterday, I posted my story. It’s been a little over 24 hours since and so far, I’ve gathered 205 views, 9 votes, 2 new followers and countless favorites. Yet, yet, only two comments!

Comments are the one thing I write for. I crave constructive feedback. So if anyone could please spare a few minutes to give me some (on the story itself, not here), it would mean the world to me. Specifically, feedback on my writing style, characterization, dialogue and most importantly, my progress since I first started writing.

”You sound desperate, Uz.”
“That’s because I am desperate!”

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