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Everything in Ponyville is peaceful now. Yet, there's one mare who visits a certain grave. Because, there is nothing else left to do now.
Written for the "Cozy Glow Short Story Contest" and based on the prompt "In Equestria, no creature mourned Cozy’s death, except one." Also, do note I've written for fun, though the theme is anything but.
The cover art belongs to Darksly-z, many many thanks.
This story now has a Russian Translation done by NovemberDragon!!
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That poor filly. This could have been avoided had she gotten proper help instead of being tossed into Tartarus or if Discord didn't endanger Equestria yet again.
Well written and moving. But it is debatable which is worse: being encased in stone forever, or dying a quick death instead. Fortunately, it’s not a choice many of us have to make…
10925309
I agree completely.
10925327
Thank you. And yes, a difficult choice indeed...
Oh Cozy Glow...... ;-;
I just really don't get why Hasbro abused her for no reason..... ;-;
I take it that the explanation behind Cozy's mother's expectations of finding her daughter at SoF is that Cozy's involvement in season 8th finale was covered up by all in the know?
Now I interrupt this fan fiction to bring you a special message from the Princess of Friendship's voice actress herself!
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=wzqmvInMsVU
Wow, this thugs at the heartstrings.
Yeah... no. Cozy gloated quite openly that her spell involved sending all of Equestria's magic to another dimension. Or are you just rewriting the canon to make her look more sympathetic?
10925533
She said anypony can be reformed if they want to. Cozy showed no sign of that in the series itself.
10925439
I never really understood why either.
10925447
Mhm. That's the idea here.
10925622
Thank you.....
10925841
I don't mean to not follow canon, but was there an explanation given to why she really wanted to do this? Anyways, thanks for viewing my story.
10926058
Because friendship is magic and magic is power, ergo friendship is power.
That was pretty good, but I don't get how she never had any clue something was wrong in the time between Cozy getting sent to Tartarus and the final battle.
10926160
Thanks. And that's a pretty good question. Maybe things were kept mum about it?
10926169
I suppose, but all this was probably over a period of months. Wouldn't any decent mother at least want to know where their child was?
10926173
Yeah, I get your point. The thing is, it didn’t occur to me until you mentioned it and I’m like oh snap I totally forgot about that. Whoopsie.
10926058
Yes, there was. Remember her "friendship is power" and "Empress of Friendship" speeches?
So, in this version, it wasn't Luna, Celestia and Discord who petrified them?
10926321
Nope.
10926312
Yes, I remember those, but isn't this a fanfiction? Canonically that was her true reason, and here that's just a cover up.
A very sad story, which, however, gets to the very heart. Poor Cozy...
10926345
Thank you.....
10926323
Ah, so it's the "rewriting the canon" explanation. Still not a fan...
10926522
No worries. Not everyone is a fan but hey it's a free world.
10925841
You clearly do not understand how fanfiction works. Also be aware this story is a character's poiny of view. They may lack information an omniscient narrator has.
10926536
Unfortunately, I understand how fanfiction works all too well...
10926615
Oh? Well, good for you then.....
10926615
What does this mean?
10926638
Just that some writers use that as an excuse to ignore what they want from the canon and completely rewrite characters to suit their own opinion.
That's not a jab against this story, though. Trust me, I've seen far worse examples.
10926673
Ok.
10926058
Yeah. Man... if I was a writer at Hasbro or DHX.... I would make sure that Cozy Glow was written better and got better love in the show.
Poor little Cozy, but better a quick death then an eternal stone prison.
10952706
Yeah.....
10925309
I agree. I wish discord was like "maybe I shouldn't do this" or "maybe I should think this through first before saying something"
Oh my goodness, this hit me hard! Extremely well-written, you perfectly captured the feeling of mourning someone who was taken too soon!
11107217
Thank you so much for your kind words, I appreciate it!
Very sad story
...
readies imagination magic
Someone has to give you a chance
Maybe with this you'll be able to say "i got what you wanted for me"
I shall relight your horn
11107977 great job but 😥 sad cozy had to dead but did cozy mother ever tell somepony why her daughter did what she did if not why not also was that wind cozy by the way is cozy in heaven cozy is a good girl who don't deserve to dead please tell me ps if cozy is in heaven can you make a story of it were cozy and her mommy meet again