Sometimes online, sometimes off.
To put it simply, Anon-A-Miss is back, but not for revenge. Everyone at CHS is terrified of the outcome, except they get a pleasant surprise indeed.
Yet no one is able to figure out who she is. Oh, and Sunset Shimmer and the CMC have no part in it whatsoever. None at all.
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10933401
Thank you......
Honestly, I got this idea when I was in the shower and then I'm like write it before you lose it!
10933407
I've had that plenty of times. I've had a few in weird places!
Yet? YET?! I don't like what you're hinting at.............................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................Can we get a sequel?
Ok... this was AMAZING!
Now I want a story where the original Anon-a-Miss was Sunset, but it was all posts like the ones in this story, aimed at helping others.
10933423
Maybe.
10933429
Thank you...
Now you've given me some potential work for a spinoff or a sequel.
10933436
If you do it, spinoff would be best, probably, or a different universe, since Anon-a-Miss seemed to happen normally in this universe
10933438
I'll keep that in mind.
Ho?!
10933436
In the words of the great Jean-Luc Picard: "Make it so."
I think a few of Anon-A-Miss' posts were nice and well intentioned, like the post asking for help to find Octavia's instrument case, but I really didn't like the first one. That was a really private thing that I wouldn't have liked other's to know about if it happened to me. I'd rather tell my personal friends on my own time than have it posted everywhere on the school. But that's mainly a me thing.
Otherwise, nice story.
oh, I like this. Definitely needs a sequel.
Well, once could reduce the possible suspects when anonamiss postes about Octavia misplacing her instrument, how Manu people would know of that situación? he\she knows about the dazzlings, so he/she is not knew, or not knew in tonw, perhaps a relative of a student, that and parte of the boy circle.
*brings dagger and rifle and preparing the springlock suit*
FBI OPEN UP!!!
10933461
Let's leave it to the reader's imagination.
10933522
Viola!
10933638
Thank you!
10934113
*does finger guns* You got it!
My bits is on Derpy or Wallflower Blush, nobody would suspect someone who likes everyone or someone who was invisible all The time.
Honestly, in all of the continuities of Equestria Girls I’ve seen, Anon-A-Miss coming back and being someone else is surprising. Also, a rather fresh take indeed, one that I approve of.
Um.. I have no words. Seems Anon-A-Miss did a full 180.
Wait what?!
The one word you really don’t want to hear about someone not doing the bad thing they’ve done in the past so far this time around.
Um... okay?
It's an interesting idea, but it doesn't really seem to go anywhere, to be honest. It feels very much like just the beginning of a story. It'd certainly be an intriguing opening if it was, but as is... there doesn't seem to be much else to it.
I apologize if that seems harsh - there's definitely a lot of potential here and I'd be interested in it being expanded, but otherwise...it just seems like kind of a narrative dry fire.
Though it does give me a wonderful image of a girl who coincidentally happens to be named Anon A. Miss (which, with pony/EG naming conventions, is entirely plausible) who transfers to CH and is very disturbed by all the nasty looks she keeps getting.
10934813
Mhmm.
10935232
Thank you!
10935259
Well, thanks for the review!
it was ok
10937996
Thanks for reading it!
I’ll be honest, this character has a bigger heart than me.
10950531
Aw, I'm sure you have a big heart too!
10950548
I probably don’t, because I would have screwed over everyone in that entire school.
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Hey, trust me, I would've made a mess out of things too!
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Glad I’m not the only one.
An interesting take on the whole Anon-A-Miss thing, though the twist at the end kind of weakens the whole idea of the anonymous person doing good things just because. Still, if you eventually decide to turn this into a larger story revolving around this character and her potentially backstabbing everyone for some reason… I think that it might work well with proper planning.
Writing-wise, it’s not a bad story, but it could use some polishing here and there. I didn’t notice any kind of truly recurring issue, but there were some random typos and punctuation errors as well as mixed-up words (to/too, sliver/silver, et cetera). Also, note that an ellipsis (…) always consists of three dots. No more. No less. I also noticed some issues in direct speech. I’m not going to go into detail here, but if you want, I can send you a short guide on handling that.
Lastly, there were a couple spots where more description would be great to make the story feel a bit more alive, some bits could also benefit from less telling and more showing which would help improve the atmosphere and pacing some.
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Thank you for your review. And yes, I'd love if you could give me a guide on writing better, I'd really appreciate it!