I like cheese... And cake. Mmm... Cheese-cake.
Cozy Glow won. She conquered Equestria with Chrysalis and Tirek, the only question being… What comes next?
Perhaps she should start with those dreadful windigoes… If only she could stop hearing strange voices.
Written for the Cozy Glow Short Story Contest
Prompt: Cozy Glow vs. Winning
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Damn thats brutal
I'll say that "creatures" would be the more appropriate term to refer to this particular group, since two of them are definitely not ponies.
I'm interested to see where this story goes. The premise is good.
I see the pattern with the title of the story and the title of the chapters, is this a story of a week?
I was going to say that the voice was a kind of nightmare entity, but the fact that it has information and knowledge foreign to Cozy makes me reconsider that thought.
I hope this is a dream...
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I think I fixed it, thank you.
This story is sofucking good I can't wait for the next chapters!!!!
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What if I told you
the next chapter is out
That is what wrong with the so call “Harmony” . They keep teaching her over and over, but the funny part is they keep erasing her mind everytime. we human learn from mistakes and gain experience from it. The poor filly can not learn if she get wrong one time and they reset everything
They just “shoved” the friendship into her and bombard her with a fuck-ton of ponies? It didn’t work like that
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I did notice that, the next chapter came out while I was reading this one, HA. Anyway, I read the next one too, really good, I like how you write Cozy, it all feels very in character for her. I'm excited to see what happens next!
EDIT: Oh wait it's complete. Nevermind then. Really enjoyed it, great story!!!
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Glad you liked it! Even if it's not a masterclass like other stories on the site, I'm glad people enjoyed it.