Cozy Glow vs. Flurry Heart, Ultimate Showdown of Ultimate Destiny

She tried to give her a chance, she tried to redeem her. But the time for that has passed. And now Princess Flurry Heart must confront the villainous Cozy Glow and settle things once in for all.

My second entry in the 4th Cozy Glow Short Story Contest.

Prompt: Cozy Glow vs...

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The Final, Epic Confrontation between hero and villain, turned sort of friend, but not really, now back to villain... · 6th Sep 2023 · 3,021 words
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Reversal · 8th Sep 2023 · 623 words
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Bruticus

Bruticus #2 · Sep 6th, 2023 · 2 · · The Final, Epic Confrontation between hero and villain, turned sort of friend, but not really, now back to villain... ·

keep up the good work

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I would add your name but I don't know how to

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Saiyan Cartoon Champion #3 · Sep 6th, 2023 · 2 · · The Final, Epic Confrontation between hero and villain, turned sort of friend, but not really, now back to villain... ·

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Thanks for the encouragement.

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asdtroi8895 #4 · Sep 7th, 2023 · 1 · · The Final, Epic Confrontation between hero and villain, turned sort of friend, but not really, now back to villain... ·

Very cute story! I do like this idea.

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Saiyan Cartoon Champion #5 · Sep 7th, 2023 · 1 · · The Final, Epic Confrontation between hero and villain, turned sort of friend, but not really, now back to villain... ·

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jmj #6 · Sep 8th, 2023 · 2 · · The Final, Epic Confrontation between hero and villain, turned sort of friend, but not really, now back to villain... ·

I really enjoyed this.

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Saiyan Cartoon Champion #7 · Sep 8th, 2023 · 2 · · The Final, Epic Confrontation between hero and villain, turned sort of friend, but not really, now back to villain... ·

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Good to hear

Bruticus

Bruticus #8 · Sep 10th, 2023 · 2 · · Reversal ·

good story

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would add your name but I don't know how to put it in

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Saiyan Cartoon Champion #9 · Sep 10th, 2023 · 1 · · Reversal ·

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asdtroi8895 #10 · Sep 11th, 2023 · 1 · · Reversal ·

Finally got around to reading this. Adorable ending for an adorable story!

"Practically, probably not anymore. Legally, still yes." Cadence answered while pulling the pink quilt up to Cozy's neck. Who simply pouted in response. "Maybe if you weren't so hostile with Twilight when she comes to check on you, I could convince her ease up of the terms of your probation,"

Wouldn't Cozy technically be under the jurisdiction of the Crystal Empire rather then Equestria?

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Saiyan Cartoon Champion #11 · Sep 11th, 2023 · 1 · · Reversal ·

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Thanks!

As for Cozy's legal situation, I like to think Twilight's her "parole officer" for lack of a better term. And she made a deal to give custody over to Shining and Candence because she believed it would be a better environment for her than Canterlot or Ponyville, given her history there. But Twilight still sets the terms for all this, which her family in The Crystal Empire agreed to.

Just out of curiosity, do you think the twist in this story was too obvious?

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asdtroi8895 #12 · Sep 12th, 2023 · 1 · · Reversal ·

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The twist wasn't that obvious at first, but it became very clear as to what was going on before the first half of the first chapter when Cozy started acting particularly childish.

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