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This story takes place shortly after Princess Luna's release from Nightmare Moon in Season 1 Episode 2.
Rarity is surprised when the newly returned Princess Luna comes in to her shop.
The last time they met was when Twilight faced down Nightmare Moon.
Has she come seeking revenge or does she have another reason?
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Cuuuuute. Luna awkwardly stumbling through how to show vulnerability & wanting to reinvent herself after being Nightmare Moon for so long is such a good take on her character.
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Thank you so much!
I wanted to play on that side of her personality and also build towards that ending where she gets within a hair's breadth of falling in love with Rarity.
Glad you enjoyed it!
Given Luna's medieval understanding of courtship, I would guess that she is flying Rarity to the royal treasury to view her dowry. If there were a comedy tag, I would expect the next chapter to be quite funny.