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"A world without friendship is a lonely world indeed."

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A year has passed since Twilight's coronation as princess, and the only pony who isn't happy during the anniversary party, is Twilight.

Perhaps what she needs is a night to herself, to reflect on why she's afraid to break free from her chains and find happiness.

Or perhaps what she needs is an escape. A way to run away and forget her problems... just for the night.

Luckily, the perfect escape comes to her in the form of a stranger.

Or perhaps this escape is just her next set of chains.


Sex is discussed and reflected on, but not shown.

Part of the How We Lost It series, inspired by Fluttershy's Night Out

Proofread by Schattendrache


Other Stories in the How We Lost It series:
Applejack: A Simple Pony
Rarity: What is a Worthy Man?
Rainbow Dash: Deathbed Thoughts
Pinkie Pie: What is a Smile Worth?
Fluttershy: Coming soon!

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Comments ( 13 )

This is beautiful. I love it! Tragic and yet kinda hopeful. I do wish they ended up together but they both gained what they desired.

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Yep. They both got what they wanted most, but didn't get each other. Thought it'd be a tragic twist. Thanks for reading! Hope you like the other stories in this series :twilightsmile:

Aww man... I was really hoping they'd end up together. What a let down.
But still a good read. No regrets on that.

To be fair, he did warn her.

Even thou is a little sad they didn’t ended up together, in return both of them got the courage to do what they wanted.

I agree with what Flash said about school.

Well, that was something...

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Haha. In all seriousness, this is actually how I imagined Twi losing her virginity based on her character. Ideally, she'd want to be smart and wait until she's fully ready and mature enough for it. However, she's the type to crack under pressure and do something stupid like this too, at least in my opinion.

Also, these stories were so weird for me to write since I hate clop :rainbowlaugh: I tried to balance writing a story about sex without it being clop in any sort of way.

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Well, I guess as far as stories go, they aren't bad...

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Eh, this is probably a meh story quality wise haha.

I just found them interesting to write.

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Better than meh, I'd say.

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