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Diespitris


Occasionally, I get the urge to write about candy-colored mini-horses.

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This story is a sequel to CoH (Book One) : Of Magic and Masquerades


After the chaotic debacle in the Crystal Empire, and a week's respite, Twilight secrets Sombra away to his new home in the Everfree Forest. The Castle of the Two Sisters is vacant, decrepit, dark. It's the perfect place to hide the former tyrant.

While she plans to continue her tutelage under her new friend, however, a metaphorical wrench is thrown into said plans when Ponyville makes a new and sudden addition to its town guard.

Chapters (11)
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Comments ( 67 )

Now this was a nice point to set everything up. You have the fun already ready, and the anachronisms too in place.

IT LIVES! BAM !
Instant like one of the best sombra-twilight stories continue!

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And wait...
It's Flash Sentry isn't it?
New addition?
Or Shining?
Add on after reading:
KNEW IT!
WHOS GOING TO WIN?
Sombra or flash?
PROBALY Sombra this is a Sombra X Twi Fic
To the Author:
This plot for this entire 'book' is quite predictable, hopefully you take the metaphorical steering wheel and steer it to a direction most won't see coming...
Like, I don't know, Ascension?

Ok, time to add another story to my track list. It should go without saying that I am looking forward to more. :)

Oh this is going to be good! Tracked and awaiting more! Now... unlike others, I don't actually dislike Flash Sentry. I enjoy that pairing. I just like this story's Sombra x Twilight now so much more! Flash better be after a different mare!(there are like, 5 other super hot mares in the Mane 6 to go after, afterall)

I’m so excited for this. Thank you!!!!

Very excited for this! And I completely understand what you mean by heat messing with your writing. It's been getting maybe 90/100 on average where I live, right now, and I live on a farm so I have to go outside in the heat. It's just no fun, at all.

Anyways, I'm very excited to see where this goes! And I know it'll be just as good as the first book, if not better. :twilightsmile:

Am I going to have to decide between FlashLight, and TwiBra!? You Bastard! How dare you! :twilightangry2:

Aaaaah, I love this! Can't wait to see the inevitable awkward flirting by a certain royal guard and Twilight probably being oblivious to it due to her not-yet-realised crush on one former dark Lord :twilightsmile:

Comment posted by Tingsan deleted Jun 14th, 2018

Sadly flash, your princess is in another castle.

Oh wait, darnit, that was gold too.

But this is a good setup to the other side of things. And now, the fun begins!

Cool. Cool. I require more :rainbowdetermined2:
Nice chapter. No everyones favorite purple bookhorse to be seen tho :trollestia:

Hey. Funny. Now ponies will wonder where Twilight was or is. And with Flash now guarding her, Twi is going to have to work hard to make sure flash and Sombra meet.

So pleased you’re making a sequel. I am curious to see how Flash and Sombra will meet. Most likely the former will still be sore about getting his head bonked.

Finally continued after years since reredeading the first book; thank you!!!!

That entire chapter I was cringing in sympathy for Flash. He's kind of a prick in most fics, but I still can't help but feel sorry for the guy. He's about to get his feelings crushed.

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Yeah, I noticed that, too, but I think people portray him that way because they were simply unhappy how he played the part of "romantic interest" for Twilight in Equestria Girls. It's the same reason they call him "Brad" instead of Flash Sentry, lol.

Great chapter. It looks like Sombra is openning up. Now all we need is for Flash and Twi's friends to start looking for can cut this date short.

When your friend's troubled times could be qualified as history, its got a heck of a bombshell attached.

Ship, ship, ship, ship!
Also thanks for sayin I'm lovely :rainbowkiss: :derpytongue2:

I'm curious to see what Twilight's excuse will be when everyone asks where she was lmao

Finally! I've been waiting forever for this one to come out! I'm so gonna read it, after I get done with my other edits :twilightsheepish:

I really, really tried really hard to say that, but I messed up like, the second "self-proclaimed" all the time.
Nice chapter tho.
Really

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You're not alone there :rainbowlaugh:

Great story going on! :rainbowwild: its doing well.

Nice way for Flash to make a friend. Now he can use the police to help find twilight.

Wow. It looks like Zecora knows more that Twilight knows. I hope it doesn't become public knowledge. Great chapter. I can't wait to see what happens at the party. Flash has already left, so he will be kicking himself when he realizes it.

Curses! I need to read my feed more often, I completely missed this!

Poor Flash... Wow, I never thought I'd hear myself say that.

Wow. Flash meets Twi again. Let’s see how he tries to smoosh her. Probably not that well, because he doesn't know (and neither does Twi) that Twi is crushing on a different stallion.

Comment posted by Rozen Knight deleted Sep 8th, 2018

Good chapter, am sad this feel so short, but so long as you feel good about them, my opinion hardly matters in that regard. Good work all the same! :twilightsmile:

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That’s mean. What’s wrong with my reply? I spoke truthfully and kindly. As per my comment, you know that it is true.

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The spelling, am sorry that came out far crueler than well than it should've been. I apologize. In there I went ahead and had fixed it with what was likely your intent, again I am sorry it came out as if I was saying something I didn't intend. Just trying to help, because I couldn't understand your original commit on the first go.

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Am gonna go ahead and remove it, and stuff. I do feel bad.

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Don't worry. The comment was just vague at the beginning, so I couldn't figure out what the issue was. Thanks for helping me be a better writer. I learned though. Don't comment using your iphone. Use your computer. Also I made my corrections. And yes. I'm using smoosh instead of woo.

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Aye, I went ahead and removed it regardless. Yeah, phones tend to do that, sorry to have bugged you.

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Problem. Sorry for making you feel bad.

I wonder what the doose will be? I don't think it is sombra. But someone looking for Sombra. Great chapter. I can't wait to read what happens next.

Wow. Flash seems to be a bit of a stacker here. I got lucky, but he seems to be pushing his luck. Now next chapter, lets see Twilight pine for Sombra when she checks up on him. thanks for the update.

I absolutely loved the first book and the relationship between Twilight and Sombra, would love to see how much it grows into but I wonder of how much wrench in the plans Flash would be.

I wonder what Flash's reaction would be when he sees Twilight with Sombra himself or his disguised form.

I’ll take the shipping where the relationship is properly fleshed out.

A minute or two passed them by in silence, but Twilight was patient. She made her way to the solitary table as the sandwiches and juice she packed away floated out of her saddlebags. She banished the dust from the oaken surface, then placed their lunch upon it. There were two sandwiches and two bottles of apple juice for both of them, so there wasn't much to divide and organize. As soon as she was finished, she cleared her throat. “I brought lunch, if you want some,” she said.

Apple cider you said it was Apple cider in the last chapter

Any release date for the next chapter?

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No set release date as of now, but I have stared the next chapter.

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Did you just start the chapter or did you start the chapter last year?

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