This story is a sequel to The Return of the Shadows
Princess Celestia sends King Sombra to Ponyville to learn about friendship with Twilight and her friends.
But days passed, and between Sombra and Twilight something else grows.
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Crystal Night
Reading, writing, drawing and playing. That's my life. A normal teenager life. Also I'm Portuguese /)
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Whats the crossover tag for?
5788186 Well Sombra in MLP is dead, so the crossover tag mean he's alive and the story is different. Maybe the tag crossover is wrong to use?
5789057 yes the crossover tag is meant for when you take mlp another show or game or book etc and cross them over
MOAR!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Oh my
Wait... Where is the chapter of meaniingless bonding and trials?
5879980 I won't spoil the next chapter, but I have a nice idea to make Twilight and Sombra to bond closer.
Also, if you spent some time with someone, you will start to get some feelings. Trust me
But thanks for asking!
5879210 Sure xD thx
5881683 ACCEPTED!
please continue
5918600 Thanks, I will
okay looking forward to more here.
5924170 Nice, thanks for the support!
Love it! I really like this Sombra. If he ever comes back in the show this is what he should be like.
Daaw! So cute! I think Pinkie and Sombra make great friends. Man reading this makes me wish even more that Sombra could come back.
Reading this makes me want to draw illustrations for it. I can just picture the whole story in my head and I wish the pictures were real.
Aww, I've run out of chapters to read. Oh well, it is pretty late, so it's probably for the best.
6235677 Thanks for the huge support, I really appreciate it. I started making the new chapter, it may take a while.
Loving the story.
6244806 I'm glad you're enjoying it
More please
6303677 I have more, don't worry
AWESOME I CAN'T WAIT FOR MORE
6541733 I'm glad you like it
6542221 so have you started on the next chapter?
6542364 Not yet.
SO CUTE
6559857 Thanks
PROUDNESS!
6670875 I know, I feel sad for writing this part
6671324 Thank you very much, I'm really proud of this story
Was this on hiatus, once?
6685297 Nope, it was a another story.
yay
aj go accept Somby 
Twumbra is such a cute ship.
6791904 I know right?
Need more. I will wait
6806168 Okie
For not being an English speaker, your should are extraordinary. That said, you have issues with tenses and at one point, a contraction where the full two words were needed. This is pretty common among non-native speakers (and native speakers) as tenses are what make it so hard.
7097810 Thank you, yeah it's kinda hard to write without messing up tenses and verbs and that stuff, but I'm trying to improve my writing skills. Thanks for the positive comment
Ohhhhh maaaaaa gaaaaaaaaaaaaaa ship!!!! Ship ship ship ship ship
Sounds about right there
aweasome chapter! 
always are.
7158971 Thank you so much
, I wanted to end the chapter with something funny.
I love this story!!
Are you going to continue it?
7264323 Of course, I'm just working on other stories at the moment. Thanks
Yay! I loved this chapter, great job.
7458523 Thanks, it took me a while to get a nice (almost) perfect ending and thanks for the favourite
7458794 You are Welcome!
7149438
what he said
this was good