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Alphamon_Ouryuken


"I am the Aloof Hermit, the Lord of the Empty Seat. I am the Alpha and the Omega"

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REALLY good job on the exchanges, (sexual) action, general wrap-up and possible sequel set-up in all the right places. Definitely understand the reason that this had to be an indirect seduction and also have to respect the tricks Spike used to corrupt Rarity under her own accord (with unknowing help from Sweetie and Button). And, yeah, I could see where Rarity might be somewhat jealous of Sweetie having better luck in the love department than her (at least before she was corrupted). I also got a couple of laughs out of Midnight mentioning how there was AT LEAST one thing Zecora DIDN'T have a potion for at the start of the story.

Of course, I can't help wonder if there are Succubus versions of the rest of the Mane Six in this universe. Pinkie Pie is an almost definite, given how big she is on the pleasure of herself AND others. Fluttershy is a probable (the quiet ones tend to be surprisingly freaky; not to mention Discord is almost definitely a higher-up Incubus), Applejack and Rainbow Dash are both about fifty-fifty.

Certainly looking forward to more of your work.

Oh, that was a super kinky story. Loved how Spike was able to turn Rarity like that. Please let Fluttershy be the next girl to get focus for a new story.

awesome story mate keep it up cant wait for the next story :pinkiehappy::twilightsmile:

This was good i look forward to the next installment of the story. I'm really curious what modifications Midnight has in mind for the armor Rarity was building. I would also want to see the effects of her modifications has on an unsuspecting pony. As for Sweetie and Button. I wouldn't want them turned but have something done to them. As stated after Rarity was turned by Spike he sent the excess lust magic down to them and effectively turning them lust crazy. My idea would be Spike sent down something else down to them unintentionally that infected them both and it leads to Sweetie getting pregnant with a very unique child and it is revealed it is an earthborn Succubus or incubus. With all the powers of either but able to be undetected by other paladin class ponies and when Midnight and Sunset find out they make a plan to "protect" Sweetie and Button as well as keeping them breeding until their children can grow up and then have them go out and breed with other ponies until Equestria gets overridden by Earthborn Succubi and Incubi that will help do whatever goal Midnight and Sunset are planning to do

Oh my! First Twilight and Trixie, then seducing Flash sentry so she can escape, and finally Rarity done in by Spike. Loving the way you've done this so far and if you haven't started on the story of Fluttershy maybe as an idea (just throwing this out there in case you actually haven't started the story yet because I think it would be interesting) since she does have the flutterbat form in the original show maybe have her have a dual personality thing and the ability to turn into a succubus form at will, she could be a unique half-breed and her gentle nature is pretty much what keeps her usual succubus nature in check (comes out to play for a little bit and then returns to the recesses of her mind with no defiance) Twilight or Spike, either one, could attempt to turn Fluttershy and due to her own succubus powers she realizes what's happening lets out flutterbat and things turn fun from there.

Great Universe here, I absolutely love it, and definitely look forward to any more in this series!

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All of these are really good ideas! :pinkiegasp: I might just take these under consideration. :rainbowkiss:

What a way to bring Nightmare Rarity to life. Who's next on Midnight Sparkle's hit list?

nice work

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What about Midnight turning Flash into an incubus?

Will there be a sequel to the story?

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Well, it doesn't inspire much hope.
However the future will show.
all the best.

Is there such a thing as a Incubus King?

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