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Dusk Melody


I wish I was enough. But I'm not and never will be.

Comments ( 17 )

Kink tags would be nice to have.

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Thank you for the comment. I'll add it to the story description. Hope you like the story! :twilightsmile:

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You have a kink / fetish list added. Hope you like the story! :raritywink:

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Not a problem. Was my own fault for forgetting. Haven't released anything in a year, so I'm a bit rusty :duck:

This is pretty interesting between both friends.

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Hey Flora, long time no see :twilightsmile: I know I've been away a while, but I'm back. I hope you liked the story.

This was really good.

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Thank you :raritystarry: May I ask what you liked about it?

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I'd have to say the lovingness of it all. Yes, they're dom and sub, but Rarity loves Applejack to death. If she gives the word or signal, like she did here, she's going to stop. Which is how that works, given that, from my understanding, that is rather the point of a safety net.

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That's exactly right. When a sub says stop, the play stops. Then the aftercare begins.

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Makes sense. From my admittedly academic understanding, the sub is the only truly in control. If they give the word or signal, the scene stops first, THEN both parties can discuss why why the safety net was deployed. Because if you ignore the safety net, then what's the point of having one?

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If a dominant ignores the safe word or doesn't have one at all, then it's not BDSM, it's just abuse. That's where the love and trust come into the mix. Both parties have to have complete trust in the other for the play to work.

The facesitting part was my favorit

It's always nice to see bdsm shown in a healthy and safe light. Typically I'm not a fan of brats, but the behavior here was light enough that I still appreciated it. An excellent little story, thank you.

I loved this so much! The way it was written was beautiful and the way you portrayed their relationship was perfect!

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