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ChiefKitsune
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Interesting start I'll track this story.
I wonder if we’ll see spike in another family like Celestia still has spike’s egg and uses it as a replacement for the Mc’s hatched egg Causing spike to be another pony’s companion maybe moon dancer or Trixie
tracking but dont over work yourself
If those "mature" and "sex" tags are going to be used to the fullest, then Sam literally became the Flying Sex Snake fortold by Cards Against Humanity.
Are you going to finish this one?
I know how you feel. Wrote my very first story as well. Idea wont go the hell away until putting it up here. Just wanted it to go away. But take your time and hopefully theres more to come.
Intresting ill keep an eye on this
Wait did the dude genderbend?
Did the name of Sam the Snake come from Gene Simmon's Stage Prop that he has?
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It better not be genderbend.
They happen so often for no reason.
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Snakes hide their junk inside of a cloacal vent, so I am hoping that Sam just thinks he's a female because he hasn't found his snake-wiener yet.
I can’t wait for the next chapter!!!!!
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Author said there futa
An interesting premise, i look forwards to seeing where you go with it
Sep adders are amazing
ALMOST the best sneks from TES, Lamias still Hold the number 1 spot
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Interesting
As long as this snake don't grow to the size of "Tales of Word devouring Serpent" this could be good
This very much feels like one of your first stories but not in a bad way. If I could offer a few tips to help out I would say...
1. Space things out a little more. Your pacing is a little on the quick side.
2. You show people acting shocked and then tell the audience they are shocked through direct narration. You don't need to repeat these things, if your character blushes you don't need to tell everyone she feels embarrassed.
3. Some names aren't capitalized and you have a few spelling errors. You may wish to give this one another look.
Most of the other important things you will learn as you go but if you ever want a few more tips dont hesitate to ask! Untill then I'll be looking forward to more!
Thisss ssshould be interesting
Interesting. Let's how this will progress and most curious how will the mc fully explore the consequences of futadom when their body diffeer so much from the natives.
That picture make me think that he saying this line:
"Come closer imma bit you to dead, iam not joking.."
That's a mouthful.
Alright .... this was far better then I thought it would be.
Please update soon
Mrm
Intriguing, lots of potential gonna track this
Two interesting stories in one day from you. Very nice
More please
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Thanks and like I said in the AN this was a quick job which is shocking that it is so well liked, as I don't like how I did it all. I know there are mistakes that is why I stated it was a rough version. I plan to at some point iron it out, though it won't be for a bit since I keep looking at it and can't figure out how to rewrite it to make it that much better so I'm going to go work on my other stories for a bit.
Dude, pick a tense and stick with it. Switching frequently between past and present, sometimes even within the same sentence, is extremely distracting.
I like this. I demand another! (Insert Thor meme)
Please bless us with another chapter.
So uh... What happened?
When will there be another chapter?
I look forward to the continuation of this work that captivated me from the first paragraph.
Did you not say he was a man?