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Kitsune_Kenshi


A Kitsune swordman wondering around Equestrian and beyond, having much tales to tell...

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awesome chapter cant wait for the next chapter

*<>* been a while since ive passed by Egyptian Gods in Equestria
Lets see where this trail takes us -

10493191
Well, what's the first time you've passed through the Egyptian Gods in Equestria?

Okay finally Sphinx and somnambula get some love ^^

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Sorry but this one is mainly about Sphinx and Seth.
But Somnambula will get her part.

By the way, how's the cliff hanger? Unexpected eh? Seth is a demigod, I wanna make the story more interesting instead of just putting a random human teen.

Dam!!! Over 200 views within 3 hours?! This story is powerful!

Sphinx storys are awesome :rainbowkiss: I wonder what the story will be like?

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It's fine
But she does deserve a HIE romance. At least one maybe.
She's a beautifully designed character but I guess there wasn't much to read on her personality. Which is why she doesnt get as much rep as Sphinx.

Interesting* not intersecting also how is it that the answer for her riddle was human? I know it's the answer to riddle but how could she know what the answer is if she never saw a human. Sorry if I'm sounding rude

More pls update others stories to pls love the fury story

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There's something about the cliff hanger, there's a secret between her and Horus. So she knew something about human but did not tell Seth.

...................well then

Dan

Sophocles Thebes > Egypt Thebes.

(Young Will Shatner was in the chorus)

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Huh, interesting, they're still doing Greek plays in modern days?

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Sorry, I got a better picture. Horus will look the exact same as the ones in Egyptian Mythology.

Dan

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Heck yes. Mark your calendar for this saturday.

This is a theme for Seth Rogers

Theme for Bast's battle theme

There's a thing which I hated called racism.

Why did I laugh so hard

A good start. Only 2 things I noticed

I go tp sleep

I stopped breathing for a second or so, "Who... Who said that?!" I stammered. Then I heard a chuckle, "So you talk, intersecting." Then the chamber I was in begin to light up, I covered my eyes, after been flashbanged for about a minute, I was recovering from the light. And the orange eyes in front of me, no, the creature in front of me... My eyes widened. I rubbed them to get a better look.

"So you talk, intersecting," isn't that the Sphinx speaking? If yes, a seperate paragraph

Nice! Again,

Some forced off arrows, which luckily missed us due to Bast, who's zig-zagging.

You mean fired, right?

"Bast! You alright?!" I asked with full concern, Bast recovered from the shock and nuzzled me, "It takes more than an arrow to kill me."

Parapgrah if another is speaking.

"Anyway, he told me he ws trapped here

I wan;t feeling suffocated

OVerall, it makes me curious about Seth's mother. I mean, she shouldn't suffer because of this

This sounds like Percy Jackson right?

Duly noted. Though, a blog would have done the same

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Yeah, but I accidentally added another chapter, so I have to find some use for it.

ok that fine take your time my friend:pinkiehappy::twilightsmile:

That fine school is important so I don’t mind waiting for the next chapter

I dont care what you gotta do, just dont die while doing it

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Thanks for the care, I'm going to online classes on Zoom, no worries, the story lives.

Well played, my dude! Have you ever read "The Kane Chronicles" from Rick Riordan? Can't help, but notice a few parallels! :raritywink:

Take all the time you need!

Nice work. Couldn't see any mistakes. Though, I think his mother shouldn't suffer, should know her son is alive

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