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Kitsune_Kenshi


A Kitsune swordman wondering around Equestrian and beyond, having much tales to tell...

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After Captain Celeano's airship passed through a storm, the team found themselves not in Equestria anymore. It's only the matter of time before they found out that this world is at war. They're on board of the American USS Enterprise aircraft carrier. Can they get use to the violence of war and survive it? An epic adventure takes flight.

Chapters (3)
Comments ( 32 )

interesting beginning ,i do hope you continue it.right now i am reading about WADE McCLUSKY, OF THE ENTERPRISE,.

I think you want the word vacation, not vocation.

Green is good.

Red is Wrong

Suddenly, a blue metal bird approached them. As it got closer, the friends saw what it appeared to be a window. One on the front and one on the back. There are two figures in it. Two black tubes were expanded from the back window. Twilight looked at the front window, the creature in the window also looked at him to her. A shocked expression on both of their faces.

"Keep an eye on these...holy shit!" he gasped as he saw the airship landed, a purple horse with a wing to wings and a horn waled to walk towards him. "What the fucking hell?" he stared at the purple horse.

"Alright, you guys sat to sit in here." Dick said before leaving.

"You to You'll see how powerful they can be." Dick said, "They can help. But I'll keep my eyes on them, sir."

A few comments:
1. Japanese AA fire was very weak at this point in the war, and trying to hit a dive bomber with timed fuse rounds during the actual bombing dive was almost impossible. In fact, the bombing dive itself was probably the safest part of a strike for a SBD, given that Zeros can't even follow them into a 70 degree dive without shaking themselves apart. The movie's depiction of Japanese AA fire was far far more effective than reality. I don't think it downed a single SBD at Midway.
2. Kamikaze wasn't a term used by the IJN in the war. In fact, it's a mistranslation, and the actual term was closer to "special purpose unit". They certainly weren't using them in '42. Also, it's really hard to tell how far a dive bomber is from your ship during its dive, so Japanese sailors are unlikely to realize the SBD was going below its safe drop altitude.
3. Dick Best was responsible for the hit on the Akagi that eventually sank it. However, the damage was initially relatively minor, and it took a while for the fire to spread to the aviation fuel. It was only then that stored aircraft munitions started going off, eventually dooming it.

Sources: Mostly Shattered Sword, a book I highly recommend for anyone interested in The Battle of Midway.

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I suppose you're an expert right?

10377423
This story is base on the movie Midway. I never watched the movie I just watched the short introduction of it. If I made any mistake please correct me.

awesome keep it up cant wait for the next chapter

10377423
Kamikase is the Japanese word for 'divine wind'. However, as a result of the mistranslation you point out, the word has become a byword for suicide tactics.

"DID...did...did one of them...just...talked?!" The rear gunner was both shocked and surprised.

Just how would they even know that?
* loud airplane noises*
pony: What the heck is that?
Pilot: Did you hear something?
Pilot#2 I don't know

when will the next chapter come out?:heart:

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The ponies used Magic duh! Also they want someone to guide them outta this brutal battle with being shot down.

gotta admit this looks cool as shit
it is good to see some "minor' side characters get some love

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yeah, I was excited, but you are losing points for realism here

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Okay, time for a huge explanation:

This is to all who has the same question. Look, if you were to be trapped in a world raged with brutal war and afraid of being captured and experienced, or maybe even killed, what would you do? Cry for help, yes indeed. So Twilight used a sound spell on everycreature on board that can ignore the other sounds to make sure the humans can hear them. Understood? Asking the same question multiple time is beginning to annoy me. I'm not mad, it just that you'll have to be patient and wait for my response, don't just state something without been properly answered.

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Notable Aircraft Carriers during the Battle of Midway.
American Carriers:
• USS Enterprise (CV-6)
• USS Yorktown (CV-5) [sunked by a Japanese Submarine]
• USS Hornet (CV-8) [sunk during the Battle of Santa Cruz Islands]
[USS Yorktown (CV-8) and Destroyer USS Hammann (DD-412) was sunk during the Battle of Midway]

Japanese Carriers
• Akagi
• Hiryu
• Kaga
• Soryu
[All 4 carriers sunk during the Battle of Midway]

Aircrafts during the Battle of Midway. (Both land and carrier based aircrafts.)
American Planes:
(US Navy)
• Consolidate PBY-5 Catalina, seaplanes
• Grumman TBF-1 Avenger, torpedo bombers
(US Army Air Force)
• Martin B-26 Marauder, medium bombers
• Boeing B-17 Flying Fortress, heavy bombers
(US Marines)
• Brewster F2A Buffalo, fighter planes
• Grumman F4F-3A Wildcat, fighter planes
• Chance-Vought SB2U-3 Vidincator, dive-bombers
• Douglas SBD-2 Dauntless
(USN Carriers)
• Grumman F4F-4 Wildcat, fighter planes
• Douglas SBD-3 Dauntless, dive bombers
• Douglas TBD-1 Devastator, torpedo bombers

Japanese Planes:
(IJN Carriers)
• Mitsubishi A6M Zero, fighter planes
• Nakajima B5N, torpedo bombers
• Aichi D3A, dive-bombers
• Yokosuka D4Y, dive-bombers (experimental recon planes)
(IJN Battleships and Cruisers Recon planes)
• Aichi E13A
• Nakajima E8N
• Aichi E11A

Gotta admit; very rusty but mind-numbingly fun to read. Just a few tweaks with spelling, grammar and character portrayals and should be perfect.

Please tell me this still lives?

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