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It seem very rushed on the pacing and its a bit self inserty but i still found it amusing and would like to read more :D
Interesting concept, but terrible execution. I enjoy the idea of a saiyan going to a RGRE world, but the chapter here is rushed along with little to no detailed explanation.
I will favourite this story and follow it just because it is a decent and quick read, along with the fact that I want to see how you develop this concept, however, I will also see the wasted potential of what could have been a good story. (if you wish for an example that pulls rushed events but is still a good story then please check out 'A New Empire War And Peace')
Edit: it doesn't mean that this story is bad, though it is not good.
An.
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I have to agree it is a bit rushed But let’s see where this goes
Great work
More pls
It was ok interested in more chapter
No but really.
A 1.3 foot/16 inch penis.
Like do you not understand biology or are you just that insecure?
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F**k logic
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the world biggest is 13.5 inches (34 cm) long when erect
Hey Aran I know that picture 👌
Can't wait for the next chapter
Why isn't there a porn tag?
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Not all of it is gonna be porn kiddo
"Ratings Disabled"
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Don't really care man.
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Well it looks like you care enough to disable them. . . . . .
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...
hhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm..............................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
I'm enjoying the story so far, looking forward to more chapters.
So far the story is going well and I have to say I’m enjoying it also I have two questions and a criticism! First question is who is he going to get paired up with is it one mare or multiple? Second question is will you go the “Super’s” or “GT’s” Transformations? For the criticism it could be a little longer.
Nice reference
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Can you tell where it's from? Is that from the abridged series?
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Here you go
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Thanks
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You're welcome
As I reveal my GIANT MONKEY--
(All ponies) [Aghast gasps]
...form
(All ponies)[Sighs of relief]
Random Pony: Thank God; I thought he meant penis
Treat this as an unofficial downvote.
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https://m.Cunning here's some advice:
Oh boi rainbow you just made a big mistake you don't talk about someone parents when they just died
Why do most 'Super Powerful Alien in Equestria' stories turn Rainbow into a massive b***h?
This is getting better and better each chapter I can't wait to see what happens next (no rush).
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I wonder that to.
This was a fun and interesting beginning I can't wait to see where this goes. This you can away trust RD to jump to conclusions.
This was a very fun and interesting chapter I hope this follows super.
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1: Probably. But I'm gonna stick with the Cannon transformations for now.
2: read my blog post to see why they are short.
3: yes he will be with multiple mares
Well that escalated quickly
Looks okay so far just can't wait for the next chapter
I have read your bio and I’m sorry for my early misunderstanding of your situation, as for the latest chapter it’s amazing.
This was epic first transformation /the beginning of his hopeful herd. I can't wait to see where else this goes.
Perhaps making longer chapters would be nice? Not that the story isn't cool or anything, just super short chapters really frequently can burn you out faster.
Ha this was a awesomely epic and funny chapter, I hope he get all the princesses and main six next.
Nice
This was a fun and interesting chapter I hope he add the Mane-iac into the harem.
so......... how long till zacora tells the soon to be papa??
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In a few more chapters.