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Sparrow Knight


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Why are you rewriting this story?

9738684
Rushed through it initially and skipped a lot of plot openings that I wanted to involve

I've completely forgotten about the old story anyway since it has been stuck in my Tracking list for who knows how long.

9742225
Yea, to be honest I completely forgot about it also. But hopefully it'll be alright

So the guy is like an angel

9780441
Angelkin, just a human with the ability to occasionally summon wings that for a minute or so. Not saying what type he is cause spoilers.

You know, there's another story on here that's called Washed Up. It starred Shining Armor, who has lost his memories, being taken in by an all-female gang of pirates. Will this story be anything like that?

9780504
No, this is more of a rework of my other story called washed up

i'm happy you rewrite this story, but i wonder what you do next chapter. also, if you like i can give you a list:

Twilight Sparkle
Pinkie Pie
Applejack
Fluttershy
Rarity
Rainbow Dash
Princess Celestia
Princess Luna
Sunset Shimmer
Adagio Dazzle
Aria Blaze
Sonata Dusk
Gloriosa Daisy
Starlight Glimmer
Zecora
Tempest Shadow aka Fizzlepop Berrytwist
Juniper Montage
Derpy Hooves
Vinyl Scratch
Octavia Melody
Lyra Heartstrings
Bon Bon
Queen Novo
Princess Cadance
Shining Armor (rule 63)
Big Macintosh (Rule 63)
Queen Umbra (rule 63)
Queen Chrysalis
Princess Skystar
Ember
Autumn Blaze
Amaranthine
Twilight Velvet
Pear Butter
Cookie Crumbles
Daisy
Gilda
Roseluck
Flower PebbleShy
Windy Whistles
Cloudy Quartz
Saffron Masala
Fleetfoot
Cloud Kicker
Sapphire Shores
Spitefire
Angel Wings
Amethyst Star
Berryshine
Cheerilee
Cloud Chaser and Flitter
Blossomforth
Coco Pommel
Coloratura
Daring Do
Chestnut Magnifico
Dr. Fauna
Fleur Di Lee
High Winds
Indigo Zap
Sour Sweet
Sugarcoat
Sunny Flare
Lemon Zest
Lemony Gem
Lightning Dust
Lily Valley
Mage Meadowbrook
Mane-iac
Maud Pie
Mayor Mare
Minuette
Mistmane
Misty Fly
Moon Dancer
Cup Cake
Ms. Harshwhinny
Night Glider
Nurse Redheart
Photo Finish
Princess Amore
Royal Ribbon
Sapphire Shores
Sassy Saddles
Silver Spanner
Somnambula
Songbird Serenade
Lotus Blossom
Aloe
Sugar Belle
Sunshine Smiles and Moonlight Raven
Tree Hugger
Trixie
Vapor Trail
Violet Blurr and Pixel Pizzaz
Inky Rose
Lily Lace
Citrus Blush
Cayenne
North Point
Vignette Valencia
Wallflower Blush
Kiwi Lollipop
Supernova Zap
Cherry Jubilee
Greta
Little Strongheart
Mjölna
Fine Line
Spring Forward
Strawberry Ice
Eclair Crème
Captain Celaeno
Autumn Gem
Principal Cinch
Aqua Blossom
Baton Switch
Cherry Crash
Cloudy Kicks
Golden Hazel
Mystery Mint
Paisley
Rose Heart
Sophisticata
Sweet Leaves
Tennis Match
Watermelody

i hope you like it?

9818991
Thanks for the list mate, honestly it's been a while since I have watched the show a d so I have to do a refreshed couse while I'm writing but hopefully the next chapter will be up next week

np. but this mlp be last season 9 before reboot and like same go to eqg get reboot.

ya. what will you do when they making reboot mlp fim and eqg?

well, you can come up something in the future.

9828014
Yea true, I mean there are 9 seasons of this version of MLP to work with so I should be alright

well, i;m hope you will write something in the future. also, i'm guessing you gonna have plan of the shipwrecked chapter. also, i'm happy you like the list i made for you.

9829222
Yea I just don't want to rush this like I did with washed up. Also want to add more DnD Elements into this.

And yea I love gettingnsuggestions and such mate cause it's been a fairly long time since I have watched the series

ya and i'm hopely see news chapter soon and one step at a time. also, i hope there a change there be something for him to help on the adventures. also, maybe next time you can use this: https://www.derpibooru.org/tags/artist-colon-marauder6272 for the mare figure more sexy body they will have.

9831386
Oh trust me, when he starts remembering who he is, his usefulness will increase.

And as nice as those are might not go to the extreme of everymare being like that but still

k. just try write news chapter and maybe make good as shit.

you dont find many stories with this much potential these days, this is sure to be a good story

9833716
Oh well thanks mate I'm trying to make it decent

sorry to hear. also, can't wait for the next chapter.

Wow these ponies are cunts also this guy just let a rando dig around in his mouth for 10mins........first fucken gross, second that's sounds like a quick way of getting yourself bit or punched in the throat by a normal person.

9912496
My reasoning for letting her do so was probably to better his chances of getting medical treatment

9912520
Still its a bizarrely submissive thing to do.

9912524
Yea I attempted to make it seem that he was kind of exhausted from being resurrected and such but I guess I messed up

any idea when we can expect an update and new chapter?

Thresal

Excuse me, but were you attempting to use the word "Thestral"? Because if that's the case, then you're a bit off of the mark.

9969048
Hahaha yea just a tad, sorry tried googling it but seeing as I was no where close I attempted to sound it out but well I am kinda shit at it XD . This will be fixed when I get home from work and hopefully will not be a problem in further chapter... maybe

Ya need a person to proofread for you. But it's good so far and I would love to see more DnD creatures

9969246
Yea I don't know if anyone would be keen to as I only right just before work (stupid hours of the morning) like 2-4 times a week so my writing schedule is all over the place... and that is when i dont rewrite a chapter 10 times

wlecome back hope new chapter be coming

You got to have a mindflayer or a beholder, don't care how you do it. Just a nod to the classics.

9970736
Hahaha true, was having a few ideas about those

9970813
Probably put one in subconsciously hahaha

If the main OCs in this story were voiced, what would they sound like?

9818991
Jesus duck that's a lot of characters

9912520
well ponies don't seem to have the Hippocratic oath

What I've read of the first chapter seems intriguing, but the story doesn't belong in the language barrier section.

I hope we get an up soon it’s been far to long

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