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DaymanHS
A guy who loves Mlp, video games, anime, and Kamen Riders
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10462878
I see your interested
Ok....let's see where this goes keep up the good work
10462923
Thank you I didn't think anyone would like it after seeing it get 3 dislikes
10462934
Hey no problem just remember it's not the likes or dislike u get it's the views I have read some fanfiction that have less likes then dislike but still has tons of views some people just forget about it that all keep up the good work can't wait to see what you do next
Nice start dude!
I really liked the prologue
And, i just have to ask, why the specific tags?
Hope you can continue this story! :)
10463098
Keep in mind I am still new to posting stories here on fimfiction so I wasn't sure what tags I had to place here
10463318
It's good dude
Just thought i asked
I'm new too
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10463450
What does that mean?
10463466
Basically, if you're wondering about where some of your downvotes might be coming from... that's one of the potential reasons. Because when your sentences are lacking something that vital, over and over, the absence stands out.
Good luck with your story. You're going to need it.
10463489
"you're going to need it"
Damn dude
:(
10463489
That I can agree on
10463595
He meant you need commas more. Like this: ,
Comma: A punctuation mark (,) indicating a pause between parts of a sentence. It is also used to separate items in a list and to mark the place of thousands in a large numeral.
But you be fine. Heck, I only have just Read Stories, and comment them a lot all year. And I didn't even wrote a story ever, not yet at least. But your story is okay, so you do fine.
10463632
Yeah though this story is what was driving me nuts since I was originally working on Crimson prince. Once I make a few chapters for frank I will continue the first story
10463640
I forgot to tell you about on how is this the "Spin Off" of the first story? Is the Crimson Prince Protagonist, and Frank are in the same Equestria/Universe?
10463673
Think of it as an alternate universe were a human is brought to equestria and that both human characters have the same face with some minor differences
10463678
Those two are the same??!! But Alternate Versions!
Like for example: DC Comics Canon Heroes Batman and Superman. And Injustice Universe's Insurgency Heroic Batman, and Regime Evil Superman.
10463725
Yeah something I came up with in Deviantart.com Dayman is the main one and the ones that look like him are alternate versions of himself from different universes. Frank being one of them
10463726
Cool. Reminds me of Goku and Vegata from Dragon Ball Z Series. With having their once Original GT Versions with Super Saiyan Four and Super Saiyan Five ( Fanmade). And the Recent DB Super with their Super Saiyan God forms ( SSJ God, SSJ Blue, SSJ Blue Kaio Ken, Mastered and Evolution) and Ultra Instant.
I’m confused about a lot of things.
10483992
Its a superhuman who comes to equestria only for him to experience something much more bizarre as he tries to make a new life here
10484089
Oh, I thought he was some sort of alien. Also, didn’t the story mention him being in a spaceship?
10484143
Well he is part alien and I will explain in another chapter and I didn't write anything about him being in a spaceship. He can fly thanks to his abilities and was brought to equestria through a portal
10484273
It said that he had to find a place to be safe from everyone on earth, so I assumed he went to another planet.
10484312
When I wrote that I meant that he went into hiding from the public eye on earth
10484460
Ohh
10484772
Yeah
10484829
So, he’s superhuman, and that’s why they want his DNA?
10484890
Yeah and try to weaponize it
10484915
And, how long has he had it for? Because, when he uses it he seems nonchalant.
10484962
Well its been a year for him
10484977
Ohh
10485023
Yeah and he has had time to learn how to use them but prefers not to
10485223
Makes sense
10485233
Yeah though I can tell you things will get interesting very soon
10485340
Oh ok
...
interesting
Well damn that was a interesting hello. I love this so far till the next chapter peace.
"Use quotation marks to indicate speech"
Was she under a trance?
Is she the co-ruler?
10504042
First yes and second I got the idea from other stories since she rules of the day while her sister rules over the night so I figured that it be that way
10504123
Ohh
10504128
Its also why I titled this chapter as WTF
10504136
Because she was in a trance or because of the co-ruler part?
I can't tell if your story already having 500 overall views is ridiculous, understandable, or just depressing.
10538415
I am surprised myself dude but then again something like this hasn't been done before. Which is why I figured why the hell not
Seriously, first Luna acts like a Rude Bitch to him. And DIDN'T Apologized! Then, Rainbow Dash acts a little rude, despite Frank Saving Twilight's Life. Now, the Guards are ACTING PURE IDIOTS by raising their Weapons to the Hero??!!
Frank should CALL out ALL their Racism/Xenophobic/Prejudice Assholes that he have just save the day. But, is TREATED like this??!!
And he is a Human, NOT F****** "Creature" Damn It!
😡 😠