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Saved the day, the night, and the girl too.


The Gods of Destruction are deities who destroy planets, races, or threats that put the development of their respective universes at risk, as opposed to the Supreme Kais, the Gods of Creation, who create and fill planets with life, in order to maintain the balance of the universe. Along with the Kais, they rule and oversee the formerly eighteen, currently twelve universes, with each universe having its own destroyer... but one does not have either kai's or a god of destruction. Time for an average dbs fan to take a gods place!

(Featured On 3/20/2020)

Chapters (3)
Comments ( 49 )

Hey thatโ€™s pretty good

This is a pretty good story

Alright, alright... this is a promising start. Now all we have to do is wait for Marcus to meet the ponies.

Nice! I am happy to say that I am enjoying this story! It's too bad that there aren't more chapters yet, so I will have to read something else until it's updated again. Go beyond! Plus Ultra!

Ok that was awesome

Congratz, you got featured. 3/20/2020

Not bad for a start can't wait to see what happens next

Not bad. Getting ready for the next chapter

Writing isn't great...But I'll still give it a follow. It's early days yet.

Interesting. I look forward to seeing how this story goes. I give it two thumbs up. Keep up the good work:twilightsmile:

I'm sorry, but the writing needs quite a bit of editing, and some things that happen in the story don't make much sense.

Just to give one example, why would Cadance assume that a couple of weird creatures she's never seen before are changelings in disguise? Changelings (according to her) disguise themselves as somepony their intended victim loves. Turning into two bizarre strangers doesn't make any sense.

Finally I've been waiting for a fanfic that involves a god of destruction and i think this fanfic is not so bad i did enjoy it this far ๐Ÿ˜

Aww that adorable and thx ๐Ÿ˜

Alright, alright I'm on it. The next chapter would be probably out this friday. Until then, stay calm dude.

See you when you get back

Except this season you

Uhhhh so anyone want to tell him how power levels work orrrr should I?

power level stink and have no real weight

โ€œWell isnโ€™t that fucking onimus!โ€ Marcus stated.

I think you mean "ominous".

โ€œTHIS IS THE END! FINAL FLAAAAAAASSSSHHHH!!!โ€ Marcus yelled as he put two of his hands together and shot out the attack. The changelings dispersed as twelve of them were caught in a direct line of fire, disintegrating them as the beam was seen in outer space.

Talk about overkill, there's no way these changelings even have a 4 digit power level why is a God of destruction using such large scale attacks haha

Well it's not really power levels more along the lines of the multipliers of ssj and its forms

How is Final Flash overkill? I mean I see your point, but Marcus has a move where he LITERALLY erases the soul and body of a person and destroy planets with a single snap of his fingers. And beerus is OP as fuck. what does he have to do with this? well he destroyed half a planet with a snap of his fingers.

not even that he just touched it.

The dialogue seemed forced. No one acted like real people.

I don't think the changelings even have a TWO digit power level.

And this was nothing more than a retelling of the episode

Now Whis did not only train Marcus, but told him if he were to get married or in a relationship where someone truly loves him back, since his race is near extinct, he is able to not only transfer his god like powers and role as a second God of destruction to his partner, but give them the full blood as a saiyan to hold the power in them. Supposedly, this is magic.

Yeesh! Thanks for the foreshadowing. At least I know I shouldn't look forward to this.

Can't wait till the next chapter comes out it's going to be awesome and very interesting hopefully over 2000 words ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ

The story dialogue is to exact from the show. Besides that it's good.

This was a interesting beginning I am officially hyped.

That was a awesome chapter but a little cruel I feel sorry for Chrysalis.

He could've did what he did to the changeling that jumped him.

Damm that was brutal.

True. To bad there's no dragonballs.

I don't see a number for murder, kill, death mode

This is a great story I really love it keep up the great work

wow i really like this more please

please update this is a good story.

Its kind of aggravating that Luna still slept through during the changeling invasion and missed the wedding just like in the actual episode..
And apparently not even the ruckus Marcus and Whis caused didn't wake her up.
(The writers sure screwed with Luna there in that season finale there in the show..)

Though I wonder where was Spike? He was there in the original episode but got no mentioned here.

Is Chrysalis actually dead?

It is over, isn't it?
isn' it?
Isn't it over?

You won and she chose you and she loved you and shes gone.
Its over, isnt it
Why cant i move on?

when is the next chapter?

He forgot a saiyan tail was very weak to touch.

Only among the lower class. Piccolo tried it on Nappa and it didn't do anything, beyond piss him off more.

That reference is ill suited to this situation and you should be ashamed for using it here.

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