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Steel Quill
A pony with too much time on his hooves and too much plot to work with, in more ways than one. Porn Pope (TM). Also on FA!
Steel Quill
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Isn't that the same thing?
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There’s being tender with one’s lover, and then there’s making them have trouble walking
I can just imagine Starswirl being the grumpy parent always on flash’s back.
“You better be taking care of my daugh- I mean student Boy!”
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Well said.
I can't believe I never thought of this ship!
But I love it! They've got an oddly high level of chemistry between them, from their personalities to their similar situations.
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See, that’s what I said too! The Pillars are really under-used on this site.
Nice. VERY nice
Can't believe I didn't think of these two together. I feel like I should be put in jail for it
Anyway I would love to see more of these two for sure
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I don't know how or why they were overlooked, although it seems most folk just gravitated to Somnambula and Stygian first. Which gave me open room to work with Flash Magnus. I mean, there's just a lot of untapped potential there!
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Will we maaaaaybe be seeing more of them by you?
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There's always the possibility! I had not anticipated such a positive reception to the story. But if folks enjoyed it this much, I see no reason to not try.
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I really hope you do! You've written them quite nicely and the usual "Luna found romance after a thousand years" is just a bad excuse to do shipping. To an extent, it might be one here as well, but at least for a valid reason this time.
I dub this ship "Magna" (Magnus + Luna), and this claim this ship in the name of the almighty god of fanfic shipping. :-D
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Hahahaha, yes! Just so much yes.
An interesting ship to be sure, but I approve. I can definitely see this. You did well, and more loving sex is what we need around here.
So I was scrolling through my read later list and I saw this and asked myself why is this here? Luna's ok I guess, not a huge flash Magnus fan. Ahh "Celestia's messy bedsheets" yeah that would do it.
Good Lord! This was excellent! Huzzah!
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Thank you very much!
This is your official review from Dirty Little Secret's Dirty Little Contest!
Remember to vote in the contest's poll -- voting closes at midnight, June 6th.
And make sure to allow notifications from the contest group and/or follow Dirty Little Secret to get the full results and the awards show post on June 9th!
------ Review ------
Please keep in mind, I know I can be overly critical and negative at times. I can always find something to nitpick, even in the greatest works of literature ever written. Please don't take it personally!
-They're pretty cute together. It's nice how they actually have things in common and really connect with one another, and it's kind of surprising to see that in a pairing that seems so random before you get into it.
-The first scene was kind of oddly disconnected from the rest of the narrative.
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Yak’s have a surprisingly different-- almost at the end, and it finally has a grammar mistake ... so close to being perfect!-An excellent job of pacing, giving the climax enough time and even having some cool-down scenes in between.
-Also a great job of building the scene and providing an immersive experience.
------ Scores ------
To clarify what these scores mean, check my judging rubric.
Cloppability: 98/100
Allure: 87/100
Enticement: 85/100
Immersion: 95/100
Prose Quality: 89/100
Total Score: 454/500
The more specialized scores for individual prizes, as well as the results of the community poll, will be published when the full results are announced. If this story wins any awards, there will be another post in the story comments sometime after June 9th announcing that this story has won.
Thank you for participating, and thank you for contributing to Fimfic's collection of clop!
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Thank you so much! I’m glad to have gotten to participate. I eagerly await the final results!
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Good luck, Steel! This was my vote for best entry in the whole contest.
Hehe how sweet
This was amazing. I'm ashamed of myself for not reading this sooner.
Great work.
Ships aplenty! I do so hope that, even with the show over, this shipyard may never fully stop working. I can understand that it might diminish over time, but as far as I'm concerned... may this armada grow to the day fire engulfs us all.
It was a nice, unexpected pairing which worked out quite well, no doubt due to a very capable wordsmith. I'm impressed. And I just loved how... caring they were.
Thank you.