Sweet Nightmares

EThe Secret Tempest
MLP: Movie
Romance
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Captured by Tempest Shadow, you are commanded to spill classified information to her. But your secret involves her.
Human
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Tempest Shadow
BradyBunch · 1.2k words · 96 14 · 5k views

This story is a sequel to Soarin's Comfort

Nightmare Moon rules Equestria. Celestia has been banished, and your friends have been locked away, but you were spared to become a lowly servant. For the past few weeks, you did your best to serve her dutifully, until, one sunless day, you are mysteriously invited to the throne room. Why is she calling you, of all people?

Now with a reading by Agent Fluffy!

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My Little Epona

My Little Epona #1 · Nov 22nd, 2019 · 4 · ·

Wow. This was SO cool. You seriously captured Nightmare Moon's personality.
(Now I almost want to see one of Chrysalis......and then she reforms at the end or something XD)

Applefai

Applefai #2 · Nov 22nd, 2019 · 2 · ·

This was good and worth the wait, I'd love to see one of Octavia sometime and maybe one of Lyra and one of BonBon dating the reader

thewolf03

thewolf03 #3 · Nov 24th, 2019 · 2 · ·

Can you make one for day breaker?

BradyBunch

BradyBunch #4 · Nov 24th, 2019 · 2 · ·

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How will it be different than this one?

thewolf03

thewolf03 #5 · Nov 24th, 2019 · 1 · ·

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......true

Jade Dawn

Jade Dawn #6 · Dec 15th, 2019 · 2 · ·

Finally got around to commenting on this one (sorry bout that).

This one gave me chills. Like serious, legit chills. It's the feeling of being scrutinized by a being more powerful than yourself that really does it. So well done on that. And Epona down there is right; you really have managed to encapsulate Nightmare Moon's personality very very well.

Although I do have a few concerns. Is the reader truly the only human in this universe? Or are they simply spatially/dimensionally lost or something like that, and Nightmare just happened to come across them? And is Luna really "dead", or is she still there buried beneath the Nightmare?

In any case, another excellent installment, Brady.

(now you just need to do one about tempest and the best pony asmr trilogy will be complete)

Jade Dawn

Jade Dawn #7 · Dec 27th, 2019 · 2 · ·

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The only potential difference I could really see is that Daybreaker would be more manic than Nightmare Moon. But other than that, it'd be pretty much the same.

TheMysteryMuffin