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BradyBunch


You are going to LOVE ME!

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This story is a sequel to Apple of Her Eye


The first night in Equestria is uneasy. It is restless. You quiver in your sleep. You've been separated from everyone you've ever known, your future looks grim, and you're not sure if you can do anything. You're small. Insignificant.

But someone, very likely an angel, comes into your dreams to say that's just not true. And in each other, you and Luna see more than just friends. Maybe you see... hope.

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Comments ( 29 )

Aww... This is cute. :derpytongue2:

This one was just superb. I'll have to remember this fic for when I try to write Luna's dialogue myself!

cute stuff

And lo, the reader looked upon the Luna fic which BradyBunch had wrought...

...and he saw that it was very, very good.

He then proceeded to smash the favorite button and give the story an enthusiastic upvote.

Wow, extremely beautiful . You really do deserve all of your followers, plus more. MANY MORE!!!

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You're breathtaking!

This was a nice read. Looking forward to the next one

:heart::heart::heart::heart::heart:

I love this! Definitely one of the best one-shots I’ve read! Also, the first by you I’ve read so far. I figured I might as well go ahead and read it. :twilightsmile:

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There are others! Please, read them and tell me what you think!

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I will eventually, I just wanted to read the one for Luna in particular, obviously. I’m definitely looking forward to the Trixie one, especially, if I feel like reading it when it’s ready. I’ll probably take my time getting to the others, though, but I’ll definitely comment when I do! :twilightsmile:

Too much cheese

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Well, that is what the moon is made out of...

Nicely done! Truly a pleasant read!

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Please, check out my other work! I have something for everyone!

I like this. It reminds me of Luna's Anonymous, which was one of the first MLP fanfics I read and kind of set the tone for my expectations.

Cute.... Check.
Snuggles.... Check.
Luna.... Double check.

Yep. This qualifies as readworthy

Man this is the first thing Ive read that is written in Yeold Luna voice and it does not slip once. Well done.

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I made it slip from old speech into more casual tongue the more they got acquainted.

If not Rainbow Dash, then definitely Luna!

This is a super pleasant read. It's like, written ASMR

Loved it. Just.......loved it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!:heart::heart::heart::heart::heart::heart:

Hey there! I did a reading of your story! I really enjoyed the Luna one! Youtube Reading

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YOOOOO THAT'S AWESOME! Thank you so much for that. I've added it to my favorites playlist.

I loved this. Would definitely love more stories like this of Luna. Favorited.

Thy first night in Equestria… from whence didst thou come?

"Whence" means "from where". "Water had become wine, and they knew not, whence it had come". Alternatively: "...knew not, from where it had come", -- or: "...knew not where it had come from".

But otherwise you've nailed the thou-forms so far!

Ah, no. Her Lunar Majesty is inconsistent with her thous...

Must categorise! Hum-m-m...

The start of a wonderful romance! :heart:

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