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BradyBunch


You are going to LOVE ME!

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This story is a sequel to In Luna's Embrace


School's almost over. It's midterms, and classes are worse than ever. But one day, when your exams for the day are over, you have nothing better to do than kick back in the library. While you're there, a girl you've seen around introduces herself to you.

By the time you leave, a sunset is lowering in the distance, but the hopes of another Sunset are rising.

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Comments ( 25 )

You captured Sunset perfectly.

I agree with The Blue EM2
I could actually hear Sunset's voice
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This was really good! You absolutely nailed Sunset’s personality completely! I actually think this one might be a little bit better than the one with Luna, but that one’s still my favorite of the two I’ve read so far. :twilightsmile:

Which character is next?

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Someone great and powerful.

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I look forward to it

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I’m looking forward to that one, too! :twilightsmile:

This on was...different from the others, but I enjoyed it nonetheless. Can’t wait for Trixie

You know, I don't like Equestria Girls. I feel like it detracts from what made FiM so likable, and turns it into just another teen-girl drama.

That being said, I do like Sunset Shimmer.

TL;DR, Great job, Brady...again.

By the way, I know I was one of the people (or maybe the only one) who requested Luna, so would it be alright if I made another request?

Like, say...Nightmare Moon?

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I have no idea how to make her snuggleable. I might try tho :P

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To make Nightmare moon snuggleable just make her tsundere as heck. Kinda mean really reluctant but deep down she just wants a friend and a cuddle.

Great story, I liked it. I wish you good luck in your further development and writing. I am also a writer, but now I work in the https://writix.co.uk/hnd-assignment-help platform for students, but I hope that one day I can also return to writing stories.

Really liked it, would like to see more like this one with EQG characters or sunset personally but nonetheless great stuff chief.

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There's plenty others to suit your taste. Feel free to give them a try!

Could you do one with Sunset in her pony form?

How very intimate... Closeness to others... makes feel better...

What? No Princess Celestia? No Trixie? unless they aren't part of this series...
*just now notices that you have 38 stories, and this series only goes through, like, 9 of them...*
:facehoof:

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I do have Trixie, if that's what you want.

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Yeah, after looking at the rest of your stories I found out about that. Still though, no Princess Celestia? No love for the sun goddess? Aw... :pinkiesad2:

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I just have a hard time pinning it down. She's more like a mother than anything else, so it kinda feels weird.

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All right. But, wouldn't a character who's list of defining moments includes wanting to remove the sun, which would kill everything on the entire planet, be harder to do?

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Well, yeah. I guess. I actually had a beginning of a draft, but I never got around to actually developing it. Something tells me I never will. I'm focusing on other things right now.

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