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You are going to LOVE ME!

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This story is a sequel to Pinkie Pie's Promise


Twilight Sparkle: the student of the princesses, a princess in her own right, and brimming with stunning capability. She's also awkward, nerdy, and obsessed with the pursuit of knowledge. Not to mention cuter than any other mare in Ponyville!

Trouble is, you don't know how to initiate a relationship with her. Maybe there's a book that can help. Maybe...she can help.

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That was very cute, although it didn't seem as in-character to me as the previous ones(does Twilight really shout "goodness gracious me" on the show?). Maybe I just haven't seen an episode in a while.

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That verbage is just a quirk of mine. Nothing to worry about. Besides, it was kinda hard to pin her personality down. I feel like this isn't my best one.

Don’t get me wrong, this was really adorable, but it just wasn’t as good as the others. It felt a bit rushed. Still cute though

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Thank you! I plan to do better with Luna and Rarity.

This was very good, I loved it like your RD story.

Every subsequent story just keeps getting more adorable. Great work!

"Not to mention, she's cuter than any other mare in Ponyville!" Yeah………… I'm gonna have to disagree with you on that one. IMO, there are other mares cuter than Twilight.

Also:

They always convince you you have a problem.

That sentence was awkward AF. Here's a suggestion:

They always convince you that you have a problem.

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Can't blame you there. I also think there are cuter mares. (Pinkie, Rainbow, Fluttershy, and Luna come to mind) This is written for the people who do think she's the cutest, however.

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I think I'll fix that issue. Thanks for bringing it up.

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Can't blame you there. I also think there are cuter mares. (Pinkie, Rainbow, Fluttershy, and Luna come to mind). This is written for the people who do think she's the cutest, however.

Luna isn't in Ponyville (that was the qualifier, remember), but I do think she's the cuter of the two sisters. I also don't think Fluttershy's all that cute, except in the form of Flutterbat.

I think I'll fix that issue. Thanks for bringing it up.

No prob. I subconsciously read my suggestion, and only realized afterward what you had actually written! :rainbowlaugh:

Oh my goodness, I think I'm going to faint...

Exactly Twi, we know.

Hm? Ooh, no, I haven't been in a relationship before. At all. I've been too, um...awkward, I guess. You know how girls like me fare. Busy, nerdy, kinda shy, and generally...not that attractive compared to others. All in all, I'm a rather small target.

This is my relationship life in a nutshell. It's also one of the things that make Twilight my favorite of the Mane 6, being that in some ways I'm the same way as her.

This one’s really good, too! :twilightsmile:

So, Twilight is not into those Adults Only books. Well, she has to have some dignity. Even I can respect that.:twilightblush:

Thanks for the stories, They sure a pick-me-up for a loner like myself who can't speak to girls worth jack. Lol ^_^

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You read all of them?

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No not yet, The ones I did were Luna, Twilight, Rarity and Pinkie. heh.

Returning something, or...checking someone out?

Real smooth, genius. ;D

I love this! Omg you totally nailed Twilight's adorably awkward personality.

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I hope you enjoy the others I have to offer. You're gonna love 'em.

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I am! I love all these 2nd person stories! You're SO good at these!

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I don’t think I’ve seen a Starlight Glimmer one yet. Any idea when we can see it? :pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy:

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I hadn't thought about it until today. But I might have an idea or two as to what that can entail.

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Sweet. :pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy: Any idea when that would come out?

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Soon. Very soon. I'm working on multiple things for my stories at once, but I'll give this one more attention.

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Cool. Looking forward to it. Thanks for the reply. :pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy:

Me ded

Don't worry though, I died in total peace. Or maybe not, I might have been much too giddy for that. :pinkiehappy:

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Nah. Twi is the cutest (yes. I'm fucking biased because she's waifu uwu)

This is an interesting writing style, I like it

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Thanks for the input! I'm glad you like it!

Okay, here we are. The self-help book section. If I gotta be honest, I don't like these types as much. They're all the same thing. They always convince you that you have a problem. That's easy. Everyone has problems, and we all feel insecure about our height, our weight, our looks, and such. Then they tell you that the problem isn't your fault. That's also easy. No one wants to take responsibility for their actions. Finally, they just offer general advice you could find on a cat poster. 'Believe in yourself. Hang in there! Be the best you can be!' It's...not at all what I would recommend.

All hail the smartest one! May we hug you, Twilight?! For your brightness, may we? No one ever says any critique about pretentious self-help! Hugs!..

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