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BradyBunch


You are going to LOVE ME!

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Trixie is the best stage performer you have ever seen in Equestria since your arrival. Her flamboyancy, sassy attitude, and grandiose shows overwhelmed you the first time, and you never get enough of it. It comes to a head one day when you decide to check up on her after a show.

Turns out, Trixie may need you more than she lets on.

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Comments ( 17 )

I'd laugh, if Trixie actually had a spell that could turn a person into a body pillow for real.

This is really good! One of the best ones yet! :twilightsmile:

Feel free to laugh at amusing moments, my… large audience.

:rainbowhuh:

Did she just call us fat?

I like this one. Who’s next?

You know, it just occurred to me...this marks your 25th story!

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No, large in quantity. Except it isn't.

That was my interpretation.

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I thought she was referring to our height.

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She is. That was the intended interpretation.

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So, why diverge from the obvious interpretation?

So...

I just read this story after how much you’ve been begging me to read these stories in the past, and...honestly, I pretty much find myself thinking what I think of every second person story I read.

Second person fics have often been hard for me to really get or understand, and like so many others of the category, I found myself having a hard time enjoying it because of the confusing narrative and the way the story’s made.

I’m sorry if this comment seems too harsh or anything like that, especially after all this time of waiting for my reaction to a member of your SP series.

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Ah, well, taste varies. No biggie. I'm more excited to see what you think of A Rather Large Adventure.

I had tto get used to the way the story is told, just 'hearing' nothing but in the inner dialogue ( or should i say monologue). But in the end, very enjoyable

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That's okay. It's very unorthodox in nature.

This style is great and I’ve just been zooming through each one. You need a master list or something.

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