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BradyBunch


You are going to LOVE ME!

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This story is a sequel to Rarity's Romance Advice


You've been helping Applejack on the farm for the past few weeks after arriving in Ponyville. While on the farm, in between tasks, you notice the girl who allowed you to work there. There's a certain kind of beauty about her that can only be achieved by work in the hot sun. She's curt in attitude, but also gentle. No matter what she does, she's sincere in her actions. And that cute way she calls you sugarcube... You don't know exactly when, but you've developed a crush on Applejack.

Which means that one day, you need to tell her just how great she is. What you don't expect is for her to tell you the same.

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Comments ( 19 )

I don't think these romance stories are going to stop anytime soon...

I'm not complaining.

Love the premise of the story and the dialogue is good. But the formatting needs some work.

This isn’t meant to discourage but if you want help polishing it, let me know.

That’s all of the Main 6 if I’m not mistaken. That being said, who’s next :derpyderp1:?

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Luuuuuunaaaaaaaaaa!

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I can tell you’re excited for that one :twilightsmile:

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Oh, you think he's excited?

That...came out a lot creepier than I intended it to...

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It's supposed to be an approximation of an ASMR video, according the author's past comments.

Did I get that right, Brady?

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Yeah, yeah. You fill in the blanks, and all that.

...No, Ah wasn't raised in a barn! Ah just did ma chores in the barn! And ate in the barn. And… spent th' majority of my… time in the... barn…

Raised in a barn!!

Think you should've added this 😅

This one’s really good, too! :twilightsmile:

Do Octavia!!

Wow. And, another great one.

I loved this. I don't typically like Applejack -- can't stand her, actually -- but this was just too sweet. One couldn't not like it even if they tried. So sweet, so nicely-done, so heartwarming...
I especially loved that it took place in a barn. In a well-loved barn. As someone who works in and around barns nearly 24/7, I get that home-like feeling, and it's described perfectly here.

Very much looking forward to the next one I read! :twilightsmile:

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I loved this. I don't typically like Applejack -- can't stand her, actually -- but this was just too sweet. One couldn't not like it even if they tried. So sweet, so nicely-done, so heartwarming...

Wow. I must be better than I thought.

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